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1 在中国大陆，户口(the certificate of registered residence)是中国公民在一个地方合法上学、就业、获得社会保障和分配住房(housing allocation)的重要证明。中国的户口制度(household registration system)方便了政府对当地居民和流动人口(floating population)的管理，但是不便于公民的自由流动。此外，中国的户口制度把公民分为“农业户口”与“非农业户口”两大类，造成了公民身份的城乡差别，阻碍了中国的城市化进程。人们一直呼吁户口制度改革，政府也正在逐步取消户口对人口流动的限制和缩小户口的城乡差别。

参考答案：In mainland China, the certificate of registered residence is an important document for a Chinese citizen's legal access to education, employment, social security and housing allocation. China's household registration system facilitates the government in managing the local residents as well as the floating population, but it is not convenient for the free movement of citizens. Moreover, China's household registration system classifies all citizens into two major categories, "agricultural households" and "non-agricultural households", which results in differences between rural and urban citizenship and hence hinders China's urbanization. People have long been calling for reform of the household registration system. The government is also phasing out the certificate's restrictions on the population flow and lessening the differences between rural citizenship and urban citizenship.
系统解析：
1.“合法上学、就业、获得社会保障和分配住房”在汉语中都是动词，翻译时可转换成名词或名词性短语，译为 legal access to education, employment, social security and housing allocation。
2.“中国的户口制度方便了政府对当地居民和流动人口的管理，但是不便于公民的自由流动”是一个转折句，直接用but来连接两个分句即可。
3.第三句中“造成了公民身份的城乡差别，阻碍了中国的城市化进程”是“中国的户过制度把公民分为‘农业户口’与‘非农业户口’两大类”造成的两个结果，可处理成which引导的非限制性定语从句，用which results in... and hence hinders...把两个结果连接起来。
4.“最后一句由两个短句组成，且这两个短句的主语各不同，可以拆译成两句话，前一句说明人们的呼吁，后一句说明政府的做法。

2 南京是中国东部重要的政治、文化和金融中心。自三国时期(the Three Kingdoms Period)开始，先后有六个朝代在此建都。因此南京有“六朝古都”(the Ancient Capital of Six Dynasties)的美誉。南京城建于明朝，是中国现存规模最大的古城。南京不仅是一座著名的历史文化名城，也是极具特色的现代化城市。它是先进的制造业基地，也是仅次于北京、上海的第三大科教中心城市。由于地处长江下游，靠近东海，南京是中国重要的交通和通讯枢纽(hub )。2014年，第二届夏季青年奥林匹克运动会(Summer Youth Olympic Games)将在南京举办。

参考答案：Nanjing is an important political, cultural and financial center in the east of China. Since the Three Kingdoms period, there had been six dynasties taking Nanjing as their capital. Thus, Nanjing bears the reputation of "the Ancient Capital of Six Dynasties". Built in Ming Dynasty, Nanjing is the largest ancient city existing in China It is not only a well-known historic and cultural city, but a highly distinctive modern city. Being an advanced manufacturing base, Nanjing also ranks third in science and education fields among the major central cities, only next to Beijing and Shanghai. Located on the lower reaches of the Yangtze River and being close to the East China Sea, Nanjing is an important hub of transportation and communication. In 2014，the second Summer Youth Olympic Games will be held in Nanjing.
系统解析：
1.第二句较长，可以拆译为两句，前4句说有六个朝代在南京建都，后一句说南京有“六朝古都”的美誉。汉语句中的“因此”说明前后分句间存在因果关系，拆译成两句之后，仍要用thus来连接。
2.第三句“南京城建于明朝……古城”可使用过去分词短语作状语说明南京城的建城时间，即译为built in Ming dynasty；主干结构为“南京城是最大的古城”；“中国现存”可用现在分词短语existing in China来表达，作“古城”的后置定语。
3.第五句“它是先进的制造业基地，也是…”为了避免与上一句结构重复而使译文显得枯燥，可以改变句式，“是先进的制造业基地”采用“being +名词”作状语式来表达，即译为being an advanced manufacturing base。“它也是第三大科教中心城市”翻译为句子主干：Nanjing also ranks third in...。
4.倒数第二句中的“由于地处长江下游，靠近东海”讲的是南京的地理位置，可以使用分词短语作状语，译为 located on... and being close to..,，置于句首；句子的主干结构是“南京是枢纽”。
5.最后一句话在翻译中应使用被动语态，因为运动会是“举办”的受动者而不是施动者。

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