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1 中国梦(China Dream)是习近平主席提出的指导思想。他认为“中国梦”是中华民族近代最伟大的梦想，并表示这个梦一定能实现。“中国梦”的核心目标是实现中华民族的伟大复兴(the great rejuvenation)，具体来说就是实现国家富强、民族复兴和人民幸福。其根本要求是全面建成小康社会(a well-off society)。实现“中国梦”必须坚持走中国特色社会主义道路。只有国家全面、科学地发展，个人才能实现梦想。同样，只有每个人都充满激情中国梦”才能够美丽。

参考答案：China Dream is the guiding ideology put forward by President Xi Jinping. He believes that it is the greatest dream of the Chinese nation in modern times, and states that the dream can definitely be realized. The core objective of China Dream is to achieve the great rejuvenation of the Chinese nation. To be more specific, that is to realize national prosperity and rejuvenation, as well as the well-being of people. And its fundamental requirement is to build a well-off society in an all-round way. To realize the China Dream, China must insist on taking the road of socialism with Chinese characteristics. Only when the country is developed comprehensively and scientifically, can individuals realize their dreams. Similarly, only when everyone is full of passion, can China Dream be beautiful.
系统解析：
1.第一句的主干结构为“中国梦是指导思想”，“习近平主席提出的”可处理成后置定语，用过去分词短语put forward by...翻译，置于“指导思想”the guiding ideology 之后。
2.第二句包含两个动词“认为”与“表示”，翻译时可将二者处理成并列谓语，后跟that引导的宾语从句，并用 and 连接起来，即译为 He believes that... and states that...。
3.第三句句子很长，可拆译成两句。一句说“中国梦”的核心目标，一句讲它具体所指。“具体来说就是实现……”翻译成 To be more specific, that is to realize...。
4.最后两句均含有词组“只有……，才……”，可使用相同的句式，译成only when...，注意主句要使用部分倒装。

2 在中国的大城市，道路过度拥挤和交通阻塞很常见，严重影响了人们的出行、日常生活和身体健康。造成这些现象的原因主要有以下两个：一是城市规模的迅速扩大，造成城市人口激增。二是城市公共交通基础设施(infrastructure)相对滞后，导致人们更愿意使用私家车出行。如今中国政府已经采取了很多措施来减轻交通压力，例如协调发展交通系统与城市土地利用、大力发展公共交通以及倡导步行和骑自行车等绿色出行方式。

参考答案：In the large cities of China, it is quite common to see overcrowded roads and traffic jams which seriously affect people's traveling, daily life and health. The following two reasons contribute to the phenomena. One is the rapid expansion of the city size, which results in a surge of urban population. Another is the reality that the urban public transportation infrastructure lags relatively behind, leading to people's preference for private cars for going out. Now the Chinese government has taken many measures to alleviate the traffic pressure, like coordinating the development of transportation system and the utilization of urban land, forcefully developing public transportation and advocating green ways of going out, such as walking and cycling.
系统解析：
1.第一句包含两个分句“道路过度拥挤和交通阻塞很常见”和“严重影响了人们的出行、日常生活和身体健康”。可像参考译文那样，将“严重影响了……”处理成定语从句，修饰overcrowded roads and traffic jams。也可翻译成两个并列分句。
2.第二句中的“造成这些现象的原因主要有以下两个”可独立译为一句，以便更清晰地罗列“原因”。“—是城市规模……”中可将“一是城市规模的迅速扩大”处理成主干，“造成城市人口激增”可使用which引导非限制性定语从句。，
3.第三句可将“二是城市公共交通基础设施相对滞后”处理成主干，“导致人们更愿意……”使用现在分词作状语，译作leading to people's preference...，避免与上句一样使用定语从句，使句式更加多样化。
4.最后一句的主干结构是“中国政府采取了措施来减轻交通压力”。“例如”后面有三个并列动词词组“协调” 、“发展”、“倡导”，应转化为动名词形式作介词like/such as的宾语，译为coordinating..., developing...，and advocating...。

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