范文点评：
1.开篇点题，直接表明自己的观点。
2.简单介绍自己喜欢的书籍。
3.承上启下，开始讲述自己的理由。
4.结合自己的亲身感受，详述三个理由。
5.重申观点，结束全文。
句法点评：
1. Thanks to this book, I have learned that perseverance is the key to success.
本句中，thanks to表示“幸亏，由于”，that引导宾语从句。
2. For the reasons given above, I took great interest in this fantastic novel which has been listed as one of the Four Great Classical Novels of Chinese literature.
for the reasons given above 表示“鉴于上述原因”；take interest in 意为“对……感兴趣”；which引导定语从句，修饰先行词novel; be listed as意为“被列为”。

范文点评：
1.开篇引入理想校园的话题。
2.过渡句，引出理想校园的一个标准。
3.第一：要有藏书丰富的现代化图书馆。
4.第二：要有运动设施。
5.第三：要有优秀的老师。
6.对全文进行补充，让文章亮点不断。
句法点评：
1. Some prefer a big campus with grand buildings while others are fond of a campus with a large playground.
while在本句中作连词，引导并列句，表示前后对比。
2. It is not rare that many famous universities pay great attention to sports.
本句使用了 “It is (was) +形容词（或过去分词）+that...”句式，it为形式主语，真正的主语是后面that引导的主语从句。