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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Importance of Setting a Life Goal by commenting on the quote," Living without an aim is like sailing without a compass". You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

参考答案：The Importance of Setting a Life Goal
The well-known proverb “Living without an aim is like sailing without a compass.” has long been acknowledged by all of us. It tells us that without a compass, sailors tend to get lost on the vast ocean. As for individuals, life is just like a voyage on the sea. Without an aim, we are prone to succumb to outside distractions. Why is goal-setting important? Because goals can help you do very meaningful things.
Successful people have visions of what their life should be and they set lots of goals to help themselves realize their visions. A driver with an aim arrives at the destination without any waste of time. On the contrary, a driver with no aim drives aimlessly around, never getting anywhere. Without a goal, you have to live a passive life. You do not know where to go, what you want and why you are listless. Then your life becomes dull and meaningless just like the dead water in a muddy lake.
Thus, we should set a life goal according to our conditions.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇引入引言，分析引言的深层次含义，并采用自问自答的方式阐述生活目标的重要性。
2.通过举例论证和对比论证的方法，深入浅出地说明树立生活目标的重要性。
3.首尾呼应，再次点题。
句法点评：
1. Without an aim, we are prone to succumb to outside distractions.
be prone to do sth. 意为“易于做某事”，succumb to sth. 意为“屈服于某事”，这两种表达方式都很地道。
2. Then your life becomes dull and meaningless just like the dead water in a muddy lake.
用比喻的修辞手法生动地描述出生活没有目标的状态。

2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Forget the Past and Start from Now on by commenting on the line in the movie Kung Fu Panda "Yesterday is history. Tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it’s called the present (the gift) ". You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

参考答案：Forget the Past and Start from Now on
In the movie Kung Fu Panda, there is a line quoted by Master Oogway: “Yesterday is history. Tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it’s called the present (the gift)”. We have to admit the infinite wisdom of this quote, which means that we should not dwell on the past no matter how glorious or miserable it is. Instead, we should focus on the present and take action now.
On the one hand, nobody can change history. However, we can make history. We can do nothing about what has already happened, but we can make up for it before things turn worse. In Chinese history, there is a famous writer who spent several decades composing a book. On the very day that he completed, a thief stole the work. He was devastated, but he started from scratch the next day. On the other hand, numerous emperors dwelt on the past and finally destroyed their kingdoms that they built earlier.
In a word, no matter what happened, concentrate on the present and start from now on.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇简要阐述电影台词的含义，并提出论点：我们应该关注现在，从现在做起。
2.主体段落通过中国古代一位大作家丢失稿件而又从头开始的真实经历和帝王打得天下却守不住天下的例子，说明关注过去毫无意义，应该着眼未来，关注现在。
3.前后呼应，再次点题。
句法点评：
1.On the very day that he completed, a thief stole the work.
that引导限制性定语从句，修饰先行词the very day。
2. In a word, no matter what happened, concentrate on the present and start from now on.
in a word表示“总之”，是总结文章时的用语；no matter what引出让步状语从句，相当于whatever。

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