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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Patience Is a Virtue. You can cite examples to illustrate your points. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
  • 参考答案:Patience Is a Virtue
    As the saying goes, “Constant dripping wears away a stone.” Patience, an honorable virtue, appears negligible nowadays. Competitive and stressful as modern life is, patience should never be a thing of the past.
    Those with great patience seem more charming. They usually take all possible factors into consideration before setting out to do something. When confronted with complex problems, they never become anxious, but rather they calm down and cope with the complexity step by step. Thus, they eventually achieve desirable results. Patience is a kind of perseverance to not only the success itself but also their own aspirations. Meanwhile, patience shows one’s courtesy to others. In a conversation, anything like interrupting a talk can be regarded as impolite. To maintain a relationship calls for patience, without which love and care cannot be conveyed.
    In a word, on no account should people lose their patience. Otherwise, they’ll easily give up in pursuit of success and ruin harmonious relationships. Therefore, we should bear in mind that patience is a virtue.
  • 系统解析:
    范文点评:
    1.开篇利用“滴水穿石”这个成语作为切入点,提出耐心是一种永不过时的美德。
    2.深入分析为什么有耐心的人更容易成功。
    3.指出有耐心不仅对本人有益,也对他人有益,因为有耐心是对别人有礼貌的表现。
    4.结尾段交代了失去耐心的后果,然后再次点题。
    句法点评:
    1. Competitive and stressful as modern life is, patience should never be a thing of the past.
    此处为as与形容词或副词连用,引导让步状语从句的句型,as应放在形容词或副词之后,意为“尽管,虽然”。
    2. In a word, on no account should people lose their patience.
    on no account意为“绝不”,其引导的句子需要采用部分倒装的形式。
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