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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Reading Enriches the Mind. You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

参考答案：Reading Enriches the Mind
It is generally acknowledged that reading enriches the mind. Many people do reading every day. However, not all of us know the reasons why reading enriches the mind.
In my opinion, there are three reasons accounting for this. First of all, good books contain a lot of mysterious things about which we don’t know. They can not only broaden our horizons but also make us see the world better. How can we know Chinese history if we don’t open history books? Furthermore, reading will help us improve our temperament and purify our hearts. Last but not least, as the famous saying goes, books are the stepping stones to human progress. Therefore, we will make more new discoveries by reading.
In conclusion, reading does enrich the mind. Thus, all of us should enjoy reading. As we may only spend a little spare time reading, such as before sleep, after dinner, or during the trip, it is also important to select good books.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇开门见山提出论点，引起下文，自然过渡到下一段。
2.使用First of all、Furthermore、Last but not least 逐条论证，层次分明，思路清晰，并紧扣作文话题。
3.结尾段落重申观点，并指出不光要读书，还要读好书，使文章观点更丰满。
句法点评：
1. It is generally acknowledged that reading enriches the mind.
首句采用it作形式主语，代替that引导的主语从句，这是引出观点时很常用的句式。
2. In my opinion, there are three reasons accounting for this.
这句话使用分词短语accounting for this作后置定语，使句子很简练。

2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Every Coin Has Two Sides. You can cite examples to illustrate how you understand the above saying. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

参考答案：Every Coin Has Two Sides
Just as the saying goes, “so many people, so many minds.” It is quite understandable that views on an issue may vary from person to person. In other words, every coin has two sides.
There has been a widespread public debate over the children of entrepreneurs who became wealthy under China’s economic reform. Some people believe that these children can benefit from their parents’ affluence. With abundant resources and chances provided by their wealthy parents, the second generations of the rich are usually well educated and trained. They are more likely to make important contributions to our country. On the contrary, others hold that being wealthy has a negative effect on the second generation of the rich. It is quite common for them to fall into some bad habits as they flaunt their wealth and feel overly proud. Furthermore, some may jeopardize their whole future due to some grave missteps.
Therefore, every coin has two sides. The key is that we should adopt a comprehensive and rational view to analyze its advantages and disadvantages.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇从一句众所周知的谚语出发，引出文章的论点。
2.通过举例进行论证。选用大家熟悉的当前社会热议的富二代问题做例子，有很强的说服力。
3.末段重申论点，并指出怎么去做：要用全面而理性的观点看待问题。
句法点评：
1. Just as the saying goes, “so many people, so many minds”
句中just as the saying goes是引出谚语时常用的一种表达。
2. It is quite understandable that views on an issue may vary from person to person.
此句用it作形式主语，真正的主语是that引导的从句。

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