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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Prepare Yourself for Success by commenting on the saying, “The will to win means nothing without the will to prepare”. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
  • 参考答案:Prepare Yourself for Success
    If you want to succeed, first of all, you should have a strong will. However, only a strong will is far from being enough to achieve success. Adequate preparation is indispensable to success.
    The will to win means nothing without the will to prepare. For one thing, preparation can help us work more efficiently. As is known to all, sharpening your axe will not delay your job of cutting wood. Making sufficient preparation means taking no detours and working faster and better. For another, preparation can help us make sure that we are ready when good opportunities come. Chance favors only the prepared mind.
    Therefore, making full preparation is essential for anyone who wants to succeed. First, we should acquire sufficient knowledge and develop our skills. Second, we should also make adequate preparations for possible difficulties. The road to success is always a long and arduous one.
  • 系统解析:
    范文点评:
    1.开篇简要论述成功、意愿和准备三者的关系,提出论点。
    2.分两个层次论证自己的观点,论据充分、有力。
    3.末段总结全文,重申观点,并指出我们为取得成功该如何做准备。
    句法点评:
    1. As is known to all, sharpening your axe will not delay your job of cutting wood.
    句中as is known to all意为“众所周知”,类似表达还有as we all know,as everyone knows等。
    2. Making sufficient preparation means taking no detours and working faster and better.
    本句采用动名词短语做主语和宾语。
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