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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Rome Wasn’t Built in a Day. You can cite examples to illustrate how you understand the above saying. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

参考答案：Rome Wasn’t Built in a Day
“Rome wasn’t built in a day.” This saying conveys the idea that one’s achievement can’t be accomplished without perseverance and patience.
Take Edison as an example. As one of the most famous and prolific inventors of all time, Thomas Edison exerted a tremendous influence on modern life, coming up with inventions such as the light bulb, the phonograph, and the motion picture camera, etc. Edison could not have had so many inventions without perseverance and patience. This is especially true with his light bulb, which has turned night into day ever since. Edison experimented with many different materials in an attempt to make the light bulb glow longer. After thousands of attempts and numerous failures, he brought the world the incredible light. From his experience we can realize the importance of perseverance and patience.
In summary, we can achieve what we expect if we work hard and never give up. Perseverance and patience are the key factors of achieving success.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇引入谚语，通过对谚语的点评提出论点。
2.通过举例论证的方式深入阐述自己的观点。
3.末段总结全文，重申论点。
句法点评：
1. As one of the most famous and prolific inventors of all time. Thomas Edison exerted a tremendous influence on modern life, coining up with inventions such as the light bulb, the phonograph, and the motion picture camera, etc.
此句比较长，coming up with引导的分词短语作状语。
2. Edison could not have had so many inventions without perseverance and patience.
本句采用了虚拟语气，为含蓄条件句，without perseverance and patience相当于一个if引导的条状状语从句，即if he had not had perseverance and patience，所以该句的谓语使用了 could not have had 的形式，与过去的事实相反。

2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled You Reap What You Sow. You can cite examples to illustrate how you understand the above saying. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

参考答案：You Reap What You Sow
“You reap what you sow” is a well-known principle indicating that you can gain nothing if you don’t make painstaking efforts. Everyone knows that there is no free lunch in the world. There is no shortcut to success.
This principle is applicable in nature. When you plant a pear seed in the ground, you will always get a pear tree. It can also be applied to our businesses, schools and organizations. All famous people who have made great achievements owe their success to accumulating a wealth of knowledge and working industriously. No pains, no gains. Without planting trees, where is the forest? Without studying diligently, which student can obtain high scores? No one can expect to succeed due to sheer good luck. Good luck favors those who are well prepared.
Everything that we get is what we sow. While we may not see immediate gains, it is always true that eventually we will. Sometime in the future, all our efforts will amount to something.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇引入引言，并对其加以分析，提出论点。
2.就论点展开论述。
3.由自然界过渡到社会，阐述“一分耕耘，一分收获”的普遍适用性。
4.两个并列问句形成排比，增强了行文的气势和论证的说服力。
5.末段总结全文，并指出我们不要放弃，付出总会有收获。
句法点评：
1."You reap what you sow" is a well-known principle indicating that you can gain nothing if you don’t make painstaking efforts.
本句较长，indicating引导的分词短语作定语，修饰principle。
2. While we may not see immediate gains, it is always true that eventually we will.
本句中while引导让步状语从句，意为“尽管”；it is always true that...是一个固定句式，意为“……是确定无疑的”。

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