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Directions: Write an essay commenting on the remark “Self-confidence and self-reliance are the mainstays of a strong character”. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you will make yourself confident and self-reliant. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
- 参考答案：Self-confidence and self-reliance are the mainstays of a strong character. A man is considered strong only when he can rely on and have confidence in himself.
Imbued with self-confidence and self-reliance, a physically weak or handicapped man can also have a strong character. A classic example would be Nick Vujicic, an Australian who was born without limbs but still managed to graduate from university and grew to become a passionate and inspirational speaker. In fact, he has a spiritual force that is more powerful than that of someone who is physically strong. I think it is his self-reliance that makes him so self-confident. To build a strong character, we can improve our self-confidence through self-reliance. Self-reliance can be attained by challenging ourselves to do new things and exhausting our own efforts before asking for help. As we are in more control of our life, we will become more assured and confident. To sum up, self-reliance is the only road to true freedom. Only with such a freedom can we be truly confident in our real strength. - 系统解析：范文点评：
1.开篇直奔主题，引入引言，并进一步阐释。
2.承上启下，阐述充满自信、自力更生的人即使身患残疾，也无比坚强。
3.举出身残志坚的尼克.胡哲的例子，增强文章观点的说服力。
4.阐述自信与自力更生的关系。
5.结尾再次强调自力更生的重要性及其与自信的关系。
句法点评：
1. A man is considered strong only when he can rely on and have confidence in himself.
when引导时间状语从句，但是被only修饰时，就有条件状语从句的意味。
2. Only with such a freedom can we be truly confident in our real strength.
“Only+介词短语”放在句首，表示强调，此时句子谓语部分应采用部分倒装形式，即助动词或系动词应当提到主语的前面。only修饰状语从句放在主句的前面时，主句的谓语部分也应采用部分倒装的形式。
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