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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the importance of curiosity by commenting on Einstein s remark: “I have no special talents. I am only passionately curious.” You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain how we should guide our curiosity. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

参考答案：Einstein once said: “I have no special talents, I am only passionately curious”. This famous remark implies that interest is the best teacher.
Curiosity leads you to explore the mysteries of some amazing things. After the apple fell from the tree and hit Newton’s head, he became curious about the gravity and then made a big success. When I began to be curious about English, I read English stories every day so as to make steady progress in learning this fascinating language. Of course, there has been a controversy over the use of curiosity. We should know how to harness the power of curiosity to achieve positive results while taking precaution against undesirable consequences.
In conclusion, I think we should take full advantage of the curiosity while guarding against its adverse impact on our life. When you are passionately curious about something, you will find that you have special talents to make things happen.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇引入导语中提及的爱因斯坦的名言，并点明该名言的言外之意。
2.总体说明好奇心的作用。
3.以牛顿发现万有引力定律为例，证明好奇心的作用
4.以自己学习英语为例，进一步证明好奇心的重要性。
5.承认关于好奇心一直存在争议。
6.建议遵守自己的原则，正确利用好奇心。
7.最后一段总结全文，再次强调好奇心的重要作用。
句法点评：
1. This famous remark implies that interest is the best teacher.
imply意为“喑示”，imply that…为常用句式，表示“暗示了……”，that引导宾语从句。
2. I think we should take full advantage of the curiosity while guarding against its adverse impact on our life.
while在本句中表示“当……时候，与……同时”。又如：It’s not advisable that you watch TV while having your supper. 边吃饭边看电视是不可取的。

2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on thinking while reading by commenting on the remark: “Any man who reads too much and uses his own brain too little falls into lazy habits of thinking.” You can give examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

参考答案：The remark that “any man who reads too much and uses his own brain too little falls into lazy habits of thinking” reminds us of the importance of thinking while reading. Everyone should form the good habit of thinking while reading.
There is no better illustration than the experience of my own as a student. When my math teacher teaches us a problem-solving strategy, I may still find it difficult to get a similar problem solved if I just apply this strategy without thinking about its principle. Besides, Chinese ancient philosopher and educationist Mencius once declared: It is better not to believe in books at all, rather than to believe in them implicitly. His statement points to the necessity of independent thinking while reading. Only in this way can you fully enjoy the benefit of reading books.
To sum up, if you want to master the essence of what you read, just stop for a while and think it over.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇首先解释对导语中所提到的言论的理解。
2.表明自己的观点。
3.以自己作为学生的亲身经历为例，证明观点。
4.以孟子的名言为例，继续证明自己的观点。
5.总结孟子名言蕴含的意义。
6.说明边读书边思考的好处。
7.总结全文，发出倡议。
句法点评：
1. It is better not to believe in books at all, rather than to believe in them implicitly.
本句采用了It is better (not) to do sth. rather than do sth.的句型，意为“最好（不要）做某事，而不是......”。又如：It is better to stay at home rather than go hiking in such a cold day.在这样一个冷天里，最好待在家里而不是去徒步旅行。
2. Only in this way can you fully enjoy the benefit of reading books.
本句是一个only +状语置于句首引起的部分倒装句，谓语部分的情态动词或助动词要提到主语的前面。又如：Only after a bitter struggle was the aim achieved.在经过艰辛的奋斗之后，目标才得以实现。

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