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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on abandoning outdated ideas by commenting on the remark: “The difficulty lies not so much in developing new ideas as in escaping from old ones”. You can give examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
  • 参考答案:When it comes to abandoning outdated ideas, there is a saying which goes, “The difficulty lies not so much in developing new ideas as in escaping from old ones.” I think it is fairly accurate.
    As far as I am concerned, discarding an old-fashioned idea takes much more time and energy than adopting a new one. Giving up the old idea means dealing with not only the idea itself, but also all the habits associated with the idea. This can be seen in the development process of both individuals and society. Almost all the reforms that later proved to be beneficial to mankind have been achieved through cruel political struggle, heated debate or even wars. On the other hand, developing a new idea might be relatively much easier. What you have to do is to accept it gradually.
    To conclude, when faced with difficulties in abandoning old ideas and developing new ones, we’d better remain confident and keep going since the path to truth is always a tough but worthwhile one.
  • 系统解析:
    范文点评:
    1.开篇点题,表明自己赞同导语中的观点。
    2.重申自己的观点,认为“弃旧”比“迎新”更费吋间和精力。
    3.阐述戒除旧观念,不仅包括摒弃旧观念本身,还涉及摆脱与之相关的旧习惯。
    4.举例说明,像“改革”这样的“弃旧”往往会付出很大的代价。
    5.说明接受新观点比较容易,从反方面证明“弃旧”很难。
    6.总结全文,并提出建议:在面对两者的选择问题时,要“保持信心并持之以恒”。
    句法点评:
    1. As far as I am concerned, discarding an old-fashioned idea takes much more time and energy than adopting a new one.
    本句中使用了 more...than结构,意为“……比......更......”。又如:He’s got more friends than the rest of us together. 他的朋友比我们所有人的都多。
    2. To conclude, when faced with difficulties in abandoning old ideas and developing new ones, we’d better remain confident and keep going since the path to truth is always a tough but worthwhile one.
    since在本句中用作连词,引导原因状语从句,又如:Since we are young, we shouldn’t be too afraid of making mistakes. 因为我们还年轻,所以不应该太害怕犯错误。
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