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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on being patient to do small things by commenting on the remark: “Only those who have the patience to do simple things perfectly ever acquire the skill to do difficult things easily.” You can give examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
- 参考答案：The opinions about patience vary from person to person. Some hold that it is the stepping-stone that leads to a successful future. Others just pay little attention to it.
From my perspective, I am in favor of the former point of view. As a Chinese saying goes, “How can you sweep the world if you cannot even sweep a room?” It shows us that one should finish the necessary small things with patience before accomplishing big things. The wisdom of this saying has been appreciated by many people for thousands of years. There is such an example around us. At school, students who get higher scores may not be the ones with the highest intelligence quotient, but the ones with remarkable patience and perseverance. Life is like a marathon as no one knows who the winner will be until the last second.
To sum up, patience is indispensable to long-term success. Without the patience to complete basic things, success will be a castle in the air. - 系统解析：范文点评：
1.开篇引入关于“耐心”的对立观点，为下文的讨论作铺垫。
2.首先表达自己赞同“耐心是成功的石阶”的观点。
3.以中国的谚语为例，证明自己的观点。
4.用身边的例子来证明耐心的重要性。
5.把人生比作马拉松，证明耐心对人生的重要性。
6.呼应前文表达的观点，并且再次使用比喻，以引起人们对耐心的重视。
句法点评：
1. It shows us that one should finish the necessary small things with patience before accomplishing big things.
本句为It shows that...句型，意为“……表明……”，其中that引导宾语从句。
2. At school, students who get higher scores may not be the ones with the highest intelligence quotient, but the ones with remarkable patience and perseverance.
本句中，who引导定语从句，修饰先行词students。
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