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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Seize Each Day. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words according to the following guidelines:
Each day will never come back again once it passes by and we should cherish it.
Every day is a new day and we are likely to encounter new chances, so we are supposed to seize each day.
Since each day is precious, we should make each day count.
- 参考答案：Seize Each Day
As the saying goes, “Time and tide wait for no man.” Time passes by very quickly every day. What’s more, it walks away without our knowing it. So we should try to make full use of our time. In other words, we should seize every minute of the day to manage our life well. Don’t waste any of it.
Yesterday has passed by. Every day is a new beginning. Different opportunities show up every day. We should not waste our time doing anything useless or meaningless. We should do our best to work hard. It is believed that chances only favor those who are prepared. Only in this way can we achieve our goals. Every day is a new day and we are likely to encounter new chances, so we are supposed to seize each day.
Every day is very important to all of us and it is too short to waste. Since each day is precious, we should make each day count. - 系统解析：范文点评：
1.开篇用谚语“岁月不待人”引出，同时按照提纲要求阐明“时间一去不复返，因而要珍惜每一天”。
2.按照提纲第二点阐述每天都是新的开始，可能会给我们提供很多机会，故应珍惜，紧扣作文话题。
3.重申观点：珍惜每一天，要让每一天都有意义。
句法点评：
1 As the saying goes, “Time and tide wait for no man.”
as the saying goes意为“正如谚语所说”，是引出谚语的句式，增强文章的说服力。Time and tide wait for no man.意为“岁月不待人”，是一个谚语。
2. It is believed that chances only favor those who are prepared.
这句话是一个由that引导的主语从句，真正的主语是that之后的句子，it是形式主语。类似的表达方式还有：It is thought/hoped/said/known that...
3. Only in this way can we achieve our goals.
本句为“only+介词短语”引起的部分倒装句结构，在部分倒装句中，谓语部分的情态动词或助动词要提至主语之前。这句活改成正常的语序应该是：We can achieve our goals only in this way.
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