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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Take Everything Seriously. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words according to the following guidelines: Why is it important to take everything seriously? How can we take everything seriously?

参考答案：Take Everything Seriously
As we all know, in our modern world nothing is totally simple and straightforward. Something might appear easy at first, but as we proceed, we will find that it is actually extremely difficult. Therefore, we must take whatever we do seriously and be mentally prepared to make our utmost efforts. It is important to take everything seriously.
For us university students, we should take our study seriously. First of all, we should set goals in our academic studies. In addition, we should manage our school time and never put off what we should do immediately. What’s more, in our daily life we should take an active part in meaningful activities on campus in order to cultivate our sense of responsibility, positive attitudes and good qualities.
I believe that to take everything seriously is the only way to achieve our success.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇简要描述为什么要认真对待一切。
2.联系大学生的实际，自然过渡。
3.从三个方面论述如何认真对待一切。
4.末段总结全文，重申观点。
句法点评：
1. Therefore, we must take whatever we do seriously...
本句有take...seriously这一结构，意为“认真对待……”，其中whatever we do是whatever引导的宾语从句，作take的宾语。
2. I believe that to take everything seriously is the only way to achieve our success.
本句中that引导宾语从句，从句中的两个不定式分別做主语和定语。

2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Try to Understand Everyone Else and Never to Assess Them by Your Own Standard. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words according to the following guidelines: Everyone is unique, and they differ in character, personality and so on. We should be aware of this diversity, try to understand other people and never judge them by our own standard.

参考答案：There is nobody in the world that is exactly like us. Even the twins will have their differences. Therefore, everyone is unique and has his or her own beauty.
We should be aware of this diversity. Different experiences help people from different opinions, interests and personalities. For example, if someone obtains good grades at school, he or she might be enthusiastic about study and have confidence in themselves. We remember our own experiences, which help us from our own likes and dislikes. As we grow up, friends and those around us can affect our tastes, but mostly, it will be up to each of us. Every person has a unique character.
Because of personality, hobbies and other aspects of differences, people have different opinions for the same thing. We should be aware of this diversity, try to understand other people and never judge them by our own standard.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇点明每个人都是独一无二的，人人都有独到之美。
2.自然过渡，阐述提纲的第二个内容：我们应该意识到这种多样性。
3.末段阐述第三项内容：不要以自己的标准来衡量他人。
句法点评：
1. There is nobody in the world that is exactly like us.
该句中who引导定语从句，先行词为nobody，被介词短语in the world隔开，故此类定语从句被称为分隔定语从句。
2. As we grow up, friends and those around us can affect our tastes, but mostly, it will be up to each of us.
本句中含有be up to sb.这一固定说法，意为“取决于某人，由某人决定”。

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