系统解析:范文点评:
1.开篇点题:青春是人一生中的黄金时期。
2.从两方面阐述第一个论点,结构清晰。
3.指出我们应该最大限度地利用青春并努力塑造灿烂的未来。
4.用谚语来加强论述。
5.结尾重申珍惜青春这一论点。
句法点评:
1. We are young, healthy, enthusiastic and energetic, which allows us to learn a lot of advanced knowledge and technology and improve our personal qualities.
句中which引导非限制性定语从句,which指代前而内容的意思。
2. It is youth that equips us with confidence to overcome the obstacles in our life path and prepare ourselves to grow up into responsible adults.
该句为强调句型,即It is...that...,被强调部分指物时用that,指人时用who 或 that。
3.Therefore,it is very important that we shouldn’t idle away the golden time.
此处为it is+adj.+ that这一句型,从句中应使用虚拟语气,谓语动词用should+动词原形的形式,should可以省略。此类句型中常用以下形容词:important, necessary,urgent,essential 等。