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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Don’t Be Afraid of Failures and Just Try. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words according to the following guidelines:
Life is not always smooth and it takes pains to get what you want.
What should you do to face failures and overcome the difficulties in your life?
- 参考答案：Don’t Be Afraid of Failures and Just Try
Life is not always smooth. People always experience hardships and even failures in life, but those are not dreadful because hardships strengthen your minds and failures facilitate your maturity. No pains, no gains. Only those who are strong enough to face failures and learn successful lessons from failures can achieve their goals.
It is well known that failure is the mother of success and it can offer us some chances for a new try. A bold attempt is half success. First, when confronted with failures, you should be able to pull through with a smile. You should be resilient and regain faith. Second, you must seriously think over subjective and objective factors that may have caused failures. Last, you should make a plan carefully, covering a new goal and concrete implementation steps which are feasible for you.
In conclusion, it is true that failure can be an important factor which may lead to success. In any case, you should face failures rationally and try continuously until you achieve your goal. - 系统解析：范文点评：
1.使用主题句开篇，简述人生要成功，就要经历困苦和失败。用谚语完成段中过渡。
2.根据主题句，引出要勇于尝试；分三个方面论述具体做法。
3.末段总结全文，着重强调失败不可怕，要勇于尝试才能成功。
句法点评：
1. No pains, no gains.
该句为谚语，意为“没有付出就没有收获”。文中使用谚语，可增强行文说服力，加深文章可读性。
2. Last, you should make a plan carefully, covering a new goal and concrete implementation steps which are feasible for you.
句中的现在分词短语covering...steps作后置定语，修饰plan；which引导限制性定语从句，修饰先行词steps。
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