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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about a friend that helped you most. You should state the reasons and write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
- 参考答案：Without a doubt, Marco is the one who has helped me most in college. As my partner in the community, he encourages others in a positive way and sticks to everything all the time.
It was Marco who kept teaching me how to overcome difficulties when facing challenges. I still remember that I felt so frustrated at the loss of a key sponsorship that I even wanted to quit the community. However, Marco reminded me, “Victory and defeat are both common in battle. Never give up and keep trying. If you hesitate, your opportunity to succeed will go away.” With his help, I finally regained my confidence and secured a sponsorship for my community after several strenuous attempts.
Thanks to Marco, I have realized the importance of courage and confidence, which are essential for a successful life. Whenever I feel upset, his voice will echo in my ear: Never give up and keep trying. - 系统解析：范文点评：
1.开篇点题，直接交代给自己最大帮助的人是马尔科。
2.简单交代朋友的品质。
3.总体说明朋友在哪方面给了自己帮助。
4.详细讲述朋友对自己的帮助。
5.呼应主题：朋友教会了我成功人生最需要的两个品质，给我了最大的帮助。
6.时至今日，朋友的鼓励仍萦绕耳边。从侧面说明朋友给予自己的帮助是多么重要。
句法点评：
1. It was Marco who kept teaching me how to overcome difficulties when facing challenges.
本句使用了“It is/was +被强调部分+who...”的强调句型。又如：It is my mother who prepares breakfast for me each day. 是我的妈妈每天为我准备早餐。
2. Thanks to Marco, I have realized the importance of courage and confidence, which are essential for a successful life.
本句中，which引导非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词courage and confidence.
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