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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Pros and Cons of Internships. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given below.
Some people favor internships.
Others think internships are not so good.
What’s your opinion?
- 参考答案：The Pros and Cons of Internships
Some people favor internships for they believe that they can broaden their horizons and enrich their experience. Internships can usher people into the real working environment. Furthermore, an internship can offer us an opportunity to land a good position in some field that suits our experience and skills.
However, some argue that internships are not so good for internships waste precious time. They do not regard internship as a valuable preparation for one’s entry into the society. What’s more, it is not likely for people to put what they have learned into practice during a short period of internship.
In my opinion, internships are good. The first benefit is that internships can develop interpersonal and communication skills. The second benefit is that it is a good way to put knowledge and skills into practice and test our ability. The third one is that it shows people how to choose appropriate careers which suit their interests and abilities. So I believe that one can benefit from internships. - 系统解析：范文点评：
1.开篇阐明一些人赞成实习，并点明原因。
2.使用转折词自然过渡，引出有人认为实习有不利之处。
3.末段表明自己的观点，并从三个方面加以阐述，条理分明，层次清晰。
句法点评：
1. Furthermore, an internship can offer us an opportunity to land a good position in some field that suits our experience and skills.
that引导定语从句，修饰先行词position。
2. What’s more, it is not likely for people to put what they have learned into practice during a short period of internship.
what’s more表示递进，意为“而且，此外”；put...into practice是固定短语，意为“将……付诸实践，用于实际”。
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