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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Keep Doing Physical Exercise. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given below.
Why should we do physical exercise?
What’s the point of keeping doing physical exercise?
- 参考答案：Keep Doing Physical Exercise
Undoubtedly, physical exercise is very important to every individual. By doing physical exercises such as jogging, running, playing balls and gym, not only can we make our body fit but also improve our mentality and mood so as to be better qualified for study or stressful jobs we will do in the future.
It is not difficult to do physical exercise once in a while, but it is really a hard job to keep at it. Persistence is really very important. If we keep doing it every day, we will be accustomed to physical exertion, which in return will make it our hobby. Doing physical exercise throughout life can be of great value especially when we become old. By then we will find out the difference in terms of physique and health between us and those who do not do or keep doing physical exercise.
I have been jogging about one hour each day for more than five years. I really enjoy it because I believe I have benefited a lot from this habit. - 系统解析：范文点评：
1.开篇指出锻炼身体的重要性，直奔主题。
2.阐述锻炼身体为何重要。
3.阐述提纲第二点内容：坚持锻炼的重要性。
4.用切身锻炼经历作为例证，论述坚持锻炼身体的重要性，增强了论证的说服力。
句法点评：
1. If we keep doing it every day, we will be accustomed to physical exertion, which in return will make it our hobby.
该句包含if引导的条件状语从句，其主句中又包含which引导的非限制性定语从句，which指代前面we will be accustomed to physical exertion这个句子的内容。in return本意为“作为回报”，在此处意思为“反过来，反之”。
2. I have been jogging about one hour each day for more than five years.
复杂时间状语的使用，需注意时间的排列顺序，如本句中两个时间状语：about one hour each day表示频率，for more than five years 表示时间的延续，两者和句子的谓语动词jogging之间存在修饰的先后逻辑关系，这种情况下，应先说频率，再说时间的延续性。
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