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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Early Bird Catches the Worm. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given below. Success goes to those who get an early start in their day. We should try our best to be prepared for everything in advance.

参考答案：The Early Bird Catches the Worm
We all agree that success always goes to those who get an early start in their day. The foreign proverb “The early bird catches the worm” is a precious lesson for most of us. It reminds us to be diligent and well-prepared before we plan to do something. If we look around at those successful people, we will find that almost all are well-prepared and well-organized individuals. No one is to succeed with ease.
Such being the case, whenever we are faced with a task, we’d better start to prepare as early as possible. For example, if we want to land a good job upon graduation, we should study hard to get good academic records. Meanwhile, we should spend our weekends or holidays doing some part-time jobs so as to be familiar with what qualifications companies require of us. Of course, we should start to prepare resumes and interviews even one year before we graduate.
In conclusion, we should avoid being the late bird that will find nothing for it to catch.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇引入get an early start这一话题。
2.第二句引入谚语，紧扣题目。
3.具体阐述其含义，并由此引出文章的论点。
4.自然过渡到大学生如何早做准备这一话题。
5.总结全文。
句法点评：
1. Such being the case, whenever we are faced with a task, we’d better start to prepare as early as possible.
whenever引导让步状语从句；had better do sth.意为“最好……”。
2. Meanwhile, we should spend our weekends or holidays doing some part-time jobs so as to be familiar with what qualifications companies require of us.
本句中，what引导宾语从句，充当介词with的宾语。

2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Pursuing a Lifelong Interest to Enrich Your Mind. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given below. Lifelong interest is important to our life because it benefits us a great deal. How do you develop your lifelong interest?

参考答案：Pursuing a Lifelong Interest to Enrich Your Mind
Life-long interests, which may range from sports to calligraphy, are of great importance to our life. They may help us not only live more happily and meaningfully but also spend our leisure time more pleasantly. Physical exercise is my life-long interest. As a matter of fact, it has made me happy, relaxed and even excited sometimes.
In order to develop this hobby, I have kept jogging for five years. At first, I felt tired and bored, almost giving up this exercise. But whenever I found people, both young and old, jogging in the open air or gym, I was moved by their perseverance. Thus, I continued to jog although sometimes my knees and feet felt painful. Two years later, those uncomfortable feelings disappeared. I became almost addicted to jogging. Now, whenever I jog, I feel a sense of happiness and self-realization because I can go farther without feeling bored or exhausted.
To sum up, it is worthy to pursue a lifelong interest even if one is already financially successful.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇引入终生兴趣话题，指出终生兴趣的重要性。
2.从两个层面对终生兴趣的重要性展开论述。
3.以自身的经历论述如何培养终生兴趣。
4.层层深入地论述了兴趣培养的过程。
5.最后一段加以总结，突出兴趣的重要性。
句法点评：
1. Life-long interests, which may range from sports to calligraphy, are of great importance to our life.
此复合句使用了一个which引导的非限制性定语从句，使意思更加丰满紧凑。当然，也可考虑用并列句来表达这两层意思。
2. As a matter of fact, it has made me happy, relaxed and even excited sometimes.
句中使用了make sb./sth.+adj.的结构，意为“使某人/某事......”

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