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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Importance of Sharing. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words according to the following guidelines: What is about sharing? Why is it important to share with others? How should I share with others?

参考答案：The Importance of Sharing
Sharing is about possessing something with others rather than by yourself. As the Chinese old saying goes: Give roses to others and the lasting fragrance will remain in your hand. That is to say, sharing benefits both you and others.
It is very important to share with others. For one thing, it is sharing that enriches our daily life. For another, sharing brings us a sense of happiness and satisfaction. Sharing your happiness with friends will make you both happy. Sharing your sadness with friends will make you less sad.
Therefore, I should keep sharing in mind and share smiles and tears with my friends. Besides, I should participate in charitable activities and be a volunteer to help others. In addition, if I get the first prize in a contest I will tell my friends.
Anyway, sharing my emotion and things with others will not only increase my happiness, but also give other people the opportunity to taste the joyful moment I have experienced.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇按照提纲要求简要描述分享的含义。
2.阐释提纲第二点：论述分享的重要性。
3.从两个方面论述为什么分享是重要的，紧扣作文话题。
4.从三个方面表明自己应如何与别人分享。
5.末段再次强调分享的重要意义。
句法点评：
1. For one thing, it is sharing that enriches our daily life.
本句使用了强调句型，即“it is+被强调部分+that+其他”。
2. Anyway, sharing my emotion and things with others will not only increase my happiness, but also give other people the opportunity to taste the joyful moment I have experienced.
本句采用了not only...but also...的并列平行结构，意为“不仅……而且……”。

2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Air Pollution. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given below. Talk about air pollution by citing examples. What kind of measures can be taken to tackle the problem?

参考答案：Air Pollution
Many people have come to realize that the air we breathe is being seriously polluted. We cannot see as many blue skies in big cities as we did dozens of years ago. PM2.5 index, an indicator of air quality, has been going up steadily. More and more city dwellers are equipped with masks when they are in the open air.
To tackle the air pollution problem, not only should the government take effective measures, but also each enterprise and city resident should join the efforts. The government should enforce stricter laws and regulations to crack down on polluters. Enterprises should spend more money on reducing emission of pollutants. For individuals’ we should try to use the fuel-efficient means of transportation like bus and subway, recycle and reuse materials, and purchase energy-efficient goods.
All in all, it is every citizen’s duty to do something to improve the air quality. Only when we form synergy in the battle against air pollution can we enjoy better air quality in the future.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.首句直接点题，指出空气污染日益严重。
2.列举蓝天少、PM2.5指数渐高、戴口罩人数渐多等各种情况陈述空气污染越来越严重的事实。
3.第二段首句引入提纲第二点内容：如何治理污染。
4.从政府、企业、个人三个方面阐述治理空气污染的措施。
5.采用倒装句型结束全文，表示强调，使结尾更有力量。
句法点评：
1. Many people have come to realize that the air we breathe is being seriously polluted.
本句中that引导宾语从句，作realize的宾语，该宾语从句中包含一个限定性定语从句，省略了关系代词that，因为that在从句中作宾语。
2. To tackle the air pollution problem, not only should the government take effective measures, but also each enterprise and city resident should join the efforts.
本句中采用了 not only...but also...并列平行结构。在该句型中not only位于句首时，谓语应使用部分倒装的结构。但注意，but also引导的分句的谓语部分不用倒装。
3. Only when we form synergy in the battle against air pollution can we enjoy better air quality in the future.
only修饰的状语或状语从句若放在句首，句子（或主句）谓语部分应采用部分倒装的形式。

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