四级写作四级写作模拟题第36关

您的位置：在线考试首页>章节闯关>英语四级>四级写作>四级写作模拟题> 第36关

00:00:00

已做0项(正确0项，错误做0项)/共2项，剩余2项未作答

结束作答

写作题
收藏纠错

1 Directions: Write a short essay entitled On Too Frequent Upgrading of Smart-phone Apps. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words according to the following guidelines: Nowadays, people become increasingly reliant on their smart phones. Too frequent upgrading of smart-phone apps has annoyed many users. What’s your opinion about excessive upgrading of smart-phone apps?

参考答案：On Too Frequent Upgrading of Smart-phone Apps
Nowadays, we become increasingly reliant on our smart-phones, which turn out to be the most indispensable electronic gadget in our life. However, too frequent upgrading of smart-phone apps has confused and annoyed many users. In my view, I do not think it necessary to upgrade smart-phone apps too frequently.
It is apparent that frequent upgrading of smart-phone apps may not bring the optimum user experience. In the first place, the performance of trial versions may not be stable enough, which will slow the processing speed of smart-phones and lead to system instability. In the second place, the issue of incompatibility may arise when apps designers fail to take into consideration unique features of various operating systems as well as different hardware configurations of smart-phones. In addition, frequent upgrading of apps may pose security risks to smart-phones, which will become more vulnerable to viruses.
To put it simply, we should think twice before upgrading our smart-phone apps. The upgrading of apps should be based on our actual needs instead of our desire to follow the trend.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇点题，指出智能手机频繁更新应用软件这一现状，表明自己不赞成的态度。
2.自然过渡，指出手机应用软件的频繁更新不会带来最佳的用户体验。
3.分三个层次论证了自己的观点，使论证条理清晰。
4.末段总结全文，重申观点，并指出我们要理性对待智能手机应用软件的更新。
句法点评：
1. It is apparent that frequent upgrading of smart-phone apps may not bring the optimum user experience.
It is apparent that…是一个固定句式，意为“显然……”，that引导主语从句，it为形式主语，代替该主语从句。
2. In the first place, the performance of trial versions may not be stable enough, which will slow the processing speed of smart-phones and lead to system instability.
which引导非限制性定语从句，which指代前面的整个句子。

2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Idol Craze. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given below: Idol craze hasn’t cooled down these years. Many argue that idol craze has more disadvantages than advantages. What do you think about idol craze?

参考答案：Idol Craze
Idol craze hasn’t cooled down these years. Idols mainly gain their popularity among teenagers, who are obsessed with their songs or movies.
Some people believe that idol craze may benefit teenagers since it makes them passionate and energetic. What’s more, teenagers can emulate their favorite idols’ good personality traits. However, more people hold that idol craze does more harm than good to teenagers. For instance, teenagers are likely to spend beyond their means to show their support for their idols. They may purchase all the albums or concert tickets of their idols. Some teenagers may even be tempted to imitate the undesirable behaviors of their idols, such as drug-taking, smoking or drinking.
From my perspective, teenagers should avoid becoming crazy fans of idols since they are not sophisticated enough to distinguish between right and wrong. At least, blind worship of idols should be discouraged. It is necessary for those who worship idols to learn how to absorb the essence and discard the dross.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇点题，“偶像热”现象一直没有冷却下来。
2.第二段首先阐述支持者的观点。
3.紧接着阐述反对者的观点。
4.通过举例详细阐述反对者的理由，为下文引出自己的观点做铺垫。
5.承接上文，阐明自己的观点。
6.最后一句对自己的观点进行补充，避免让自己的观点显得过于片面。
句法点评：
1. Idols mainly gain their popularity among teenagers, who are obsessed with their songs or movies.
本句中who引导非限制性定语从句，先行词为teenagers。
2. For instance, teenagers are likely to spend beyond their means to show their support for their idols.
在本句中，for instance是引出具体事例的表达方法，与for example含义一致。spend beyond one’s means意为“超前消费，入不敷出地花钱”。

填写我的答案

我的笔记

: 最大支持140字