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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay according to the following instructions. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
Suppose your classmate Li Ming has won a first-class scholarship，what would you like to say to him to show your congratulations?
- 参考答案：Dear Li Ming,
I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your winning the first-class scholarship, which I have learned about from our university website. All of us feel proud of your remarkable achievements. As your classmate, I want you to know how delighted I am to be able to share your academic success.
From my perspective, you are one of the most diligent students in our class, and besides that, you are a really intelligent student. You are active in class and you spend most of your spare time in the library. Therefore, I firmly believe this scholarship is a reward that you richly deserve.
I am sure that the scholarship you have won is the first of many honors that you will attain in the years to come. I genuinely wish you could make still further achievement in the future and I am looking forward to good news from you soon again.
With best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
XXX - 系统解析：范文点评：
1.开篇写明写这封信的目的是表示祝贺，写清从何处获得消息，消息的内容是什么。
2.继而表达自己得知该消息后的喜悦心情。
3.列举李明取得成绩的原因。
4.希望其继续努力，取得更大的成绩。
5.结尾送上祝福语。
句法点评：
1. I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your winning the first-class scholarship, which I have learned about from our university website.
此句是祝贺信的常用开篇句式，类似的表达方式还有：I write to congratulate you upon…或 I am so happy to hear that…等。
2. I genuinely wish you could make still further achievement in the future and I am looking forward to good news from you soon again.
此句中包含了一个表达祝愿的句式，I wish +宾语从句。类似的表达方式还有More success to you in the future. 或 All my best wishes for an even more successful career! 本句中还包含一个表达期待的句式，即I look forward to..., 意为“我期待……”，其中to为介词，后面应接名词、代词或动名词作宾语。
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