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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the serious harm of spoiling children. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

  • 参考答案:Stop Spoiling Children
    The picture vividly describes a common phenomenon in Chinese families. In recent years, the only child has become the king or queen of some families, doing whatever he or she wants. In my view, such upbringing can only destroy rather than educate a child.
    Firstly, spoiled children are in great lack of capability for independent living. Some of them are even not able to dress, wash face or eat by themselves at school age. Secondly, spoiled children tend to be more selfish. They don't like to share with others and lack team spirit and sense of responsibility. Thirdly, spoiled children tend to care too much about material comforts, lacking the consciousness of thrift.
    In conclusion, today's children are the hope of their families and the future of our nation, and we are duty-bound to love them. However, this kind of love should be moderate. Parents' final purpose is to make their children grow into healthy and responsible citizens, thus it is inadvisable to dote on them.
  • 系统解析:
    1.首段描述图片内容,引出目前很多家庭溺爱孩子的现象,并提出自己的观点。
    2.中间段分三点对这种社会现象的弊端进行分析。
    3.末段进行总结并提出建议:应该爱自己的孩子,但应爱之有度,溺爱孩子是不可取的。
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