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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay according to the following instructions. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Suppose you are a freshman of a college and you would like to join one or two campus societies that you are interested in, how would you apply for them? Write a letter to express your intention and ask for more information about them.

参考答案：Dear Sir,
As a freshman in the English Department of our college, I am eager to join a campus society and become a member of it. I consider the campus society to be our second classroom and a stage to show our talents. Moreover, the activities organized by the campus society play an important role in developing our potential and making new friends.
As I’m good at singing and playing the piano, I hope to join the Music Society and the Drama Society. Could you tell me what the two societies have achieved in the past and how they are going to develop in the future? I’d also like to know if there are any requirements to apply for the Music Society and the Drama Society. Do I have to go through an interview for my membership in these two societies?
Your early reply will be greatly appreciated!
Yours sincerely
XXX
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.第一段首句明确表达自己的意愿。
2.自然过渡后，描述自己对社团的理解。
3.咨询更多的信息。
4.末段表达期盼对方及早回复的愿望。
5.注意格式正确，有客套语和签名。
句法点评：
1. Moreover, the activities organized by the campus society play an important role in developing our potential and making new friends.
play a role in表示“在……中发挥作用”；moreover意为“此外”，常用来表示进一步支持原观点。
2. Your early reply will be greatly appreciated!
此句型常用在询问信的结尾，类似的表达还有：Your prompt reply will be highly appreciated!

2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay according to the following instructions. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. An important international meeting will be held in your university and some foreign friends will come to your city and attend the meeting. You would like to become a volunteer to meet those foreign friends at the airport and help arrange their accommodation etc. Write a letter to the organizers to express your intention and demonstrate your strength to convince them that you are qualified for the tasks.

参考答案：Dear Sir,
As a student, I apply to be a volunteer for the international meeting to be held in our university. I have learnt that some foreign friends will come to our city and attend the meeting. I would like to become a volunteer to meet those foreign friends at the airport and help arrange their accommodation etc.
I consider myself a diligent student in our university because I have won a first-class scholarship this year. Warm-hearted and easy-going, I have been serving in the Student Union since I was a freshman. What is more, last year I took part in an English competition held by our government and won the first prize. It shows that there will be no difficulty for me to communicate with foreign friends. Therefore, I believe I am able to do well if I become a volunteer.
You can call me at xxxxxxxxxxx if you have any questions. I hope you can consider my earnest request. Your early reply will be appreciated!
Yours sincerely
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇直接表明自己想成为志愿者。
2.说明自己可从事的志愿服务内容。
3.继而表明自己做志愿者的实力。
4.留下联系方式，并请求回复。
5.注意格式正确，有客套语和签名。
句法点评：
1. I apply to be a volunteer for the international meeting to be held in our university.
apply to be a volunteer for…意为“申请成为……的志愿者”，可用在申请信的开头。
2. I would like to become a volunteer to... and help arrange their accommodation etc.
“I would like to become a volunteer to do sth.”是用来表达想从事志愿者服务的惯用句式。

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