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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay according to the following instructions. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. A recent survey shows that 73% students favor flexible educational system. How do you see flexible educational system? Do you agree or disagree? Give your reasons.

参考答案：Flexible educational system refers to a teaching mode in which students can be selective about the learning content and the length of study is controllable. I consider that the flexible educational system is to meet the demand of students who hope to have personalized and diversified educational system.
In the first place, a major advantage of the flexible educational system is the elastic learning time. We can decide the length of study by ourselves, which can offer us the chance to learn at our own pace. Furthermore, it combines practice with learning process, that is to say, learning while working. It also solves the problem of tuition for poverty-stricken students. Third, learners can be selective about the learning content and mode. There are both required and optional courses for each subject. There are both face-to-face and network-based learning in terms of learning mode. So we have more options to decide what and how we learn.
In conclusion, flexible educational system profoundly reflects the “people-oriented” principle, which will contribute to comprehensive and coordinated development of people.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇介绍弹性学制，引入话题。
2.首段末句表明自己的观点：肯定弹性学制能够满足需求。
3.分三个层次阐述自己的理由，论据充分，论证有力。
4.末段总结全文，重申观点，再次强调弹性学制的意义。
句法点评：
1. Furthermore, it combines practice with learning process, that is to say, learning while working. combine...with…意为“将……与……相结合”；that is to say意为“换句话说；更确切地说”，起解释说明作用。
2. In conclusion, flexible educational system profoundly reflects the “people-oriented” principle, which will contribute to comprehensive and coordinated development of people.
in conclusion意为“总之”，常用于文章结尾处，引出总结性的话语。

2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay according to the following instructions. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Dama square dance culture has generated some controversy recently. On the one hand, Dama square dance reflects social progress and the increasingly colorful life of senior citizens. On the other hand, many citizens who live near the square are disturbed by the noise of Dama square dance. What’s your opinion of Dama square dance? What’s your suggestion toward the problem?

参考答案：Dama square dance culture has generated some controversy recently. In my opinion, square dance has exceptional advantages of enriching senior citizens lives.
First of all, there is no doubt that Dama square dance can play an important role in improving the elderly’s health. Doing square dance may help cure some chronic diseases, thus lowering the costs of health care for the elderly. Secondly, this group activity has a social function for the lonely and helpless senior citizens, especially those from other cities. It offers a golden opportunity to make friends and communicate with each other. Finally, Damas have to spend little money on square dance.
In order to avoid disturbing people in the neighborhood, we should impose some restrictions on the “timing” and “music volume” of square dance. For instance, square dance should finish before 7 pm., and music volume should be turned down to such an extent so as not to affect other people’s life. Government should also draft relevant regulations as soon as possible.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇引入话题。
2.自然过渡，就争议表明自己的立场：肯定广场舞的优势。
3.阐述广场舞的三个优势：锻炼身体；参与社交；不需要什么费用，分三个层次论证了自己的观点，论据充分，论证有力。
4.末段提出解决问题的方法。
句法点评：
1. In my opinion, square dance has exceptional advantages of enriching senior citizens’ lives.
in my opinion表示“依我看来，在我看来”，用于表达个人观点。
2. First of all, there is no doubt that Dama square dance can play an important role in improving the elderly’s health.
there is no doubt that...表本“毫无疑问……”，是加强语气的一种句型；play an important role in…意为“在……中发挥重要作用”。

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