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1 Directions: Write a short essay according to the following instructions. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. It is reported that a non-governmental organization in China has set up a fund to reward local students enrolled by Tsinghua University or Peking University with one million yuan each. What do you think of the incentive measure? Give your reasons.

参考答案：“You will be rewarded with one million yuan as long as you are enrolled by Tsinghua University or Peking University!” This promise made by a non-governmental organization which set up an incentive fund for local students has caught much attention. As far as I am concerned, I can’t agree with the measure.
Although a reward of one million yuan can motivate some students to work harder, this measure will do more harm than good. Firstly，it’s unfair for other examinees and universities. Students enrolled by other universities may be as good as those enrolled by Tsinghua University or Peking University, which are not the only top universities in China. Secondly, high school students are still young and immature. With such a reward, they may become highly motivated learners who fall into the trap of money worship. So the measure may turn out to be counterproductive.
Every student should realize that the purpose of study is to acquire knowledge and fulfill his/her aspirations. Neither your study nor your professional career should become the means of making money.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇简要描述“设百万巨奖，激励学生考清华、北大”这一举措，引出话题。
2.表明自己的观点。
3.自然过渡，指明这项举措弊大于利。
4.分点论述自己的观点，使论证条理清晰。
5.末段总结全文，重申观点，并指出我们应有的态度。
句法点评：
1. Although a reward of one million yuan can motivate some students to work harder, this measure will do more harm than good.
although引导让步状语从句；do more harm than good是一个很有用的表达方式，意为“弊大于利”。
2. So the measure may turn out to be counterproductive.
Turn out to be…意为“最终是......，结果是…...”；counterproductive意为“事与愿违的”。

2 Directions: Write a short essay according to the following questions. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. What do you think about fake news? In your opinion, what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

参考答案：It is not uncommon that some journalists make up false or misleading stories about everything you can imagine. I am strongly opposed to unethical practice of this kind which may cause many social problems.
For example, a television journalist reported that some dumpling makers had used cardboard instead of minced meat or vegetable as filler, which caused panic among the consumers and incurred huge losses to the dumpling makers. Later, the journalist was found to have fabricated the story. Why did some journalists forsake the truth and pursue the falsehood in their reports? I suspect that most of them mainly intend to draw public attention so as to make themselves famous and rich as well.
Now, it is high time for the government to strictly enforce related laws and take effective measures to combat false and inaccurate journalism. Those who intentionally report false news that may trigger public anxiety should be severely punished or even banned from journalistic activities.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇简要指出虚假新闻屡见不鲜，并表明自己强烈反对这一现象。
2.以“纸馅包子”事件为例阐述虚假新闻的弊端，使论证更具说服力。
3.分析说明记者编造假新闻的原因。
4.提出对策，呼吁采取严厉措施，惩戒制造虚假新闻的记者。
句法点评：
1. It is not uncommon that some journalists make up false or misleading stories about everything you can imagine.
It is not uncommon that...是一个惯用表达方式，意为“……是不足为奇的”，that引导主语从句，it为形式主语，代替that引导的主语从句。
2. Now, it is high time for the government to strictly enforce related laws and take effective measures to combat false and inaccurate journalism.
It’s (high) time (for sb.) to do sth.是一个常用句式，意思是“（早该) 是做……的时候了”。
3. For instance, those who intentionally report false news that may trigger public anxiety should be severely punished or even banned from journalistic activities.
who引导定语从句，修饰先行词those (不定代词，指代“人”，相当于those people )；that引导定语从句，修饰先行词news。

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