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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Key to Becoming an Elite following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
1.有人认为成才的关键是个人能力
2.有人认为成才的关键是外部机遇
3.我的观点
  • 参考答案:The Key to Becoming an Elite
    Different people hold quite different opinions about the key to becoming a talented person. Many people assert that personal abilities count for much. They maintain such an opinion because a lot of people stand out in their peers for their remarkable capacities. However, others believe that opportunities play a vital role in one's success, which helps to explain why some people become prominent while others with similar talent are left behind.
    As far as I'm concerned, capabilities are much more important than opportunities for a person to become an elite. First, there are various chances in our society but only those who are adequately prepared can make good use of them and achieve their goals. Second, without a ready mind, golden opportunities may slip through one's fingers. Last but not least, whether there are favorable opportunities or not, what we should do is to learn and improve ourselves constantly.
    In a word, we can take advantage of opportunities to achieve success but never can they be a precondition for success. Comparatively speaking, personal abilities are more important for a person to become an elite.
  • 系统解析:
    1.首段针对成才的关键提出两种截然不同的观点。
    2.中间段阐明自己的观点,并从三个方面进行论证。
    3.末段总结全文,重申主题,指出个人能力对成才更重要。
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