系统解析:范文点评:
1.开篇首先说明历史文化遗迹存在的意义,引出话题。
2.指出人们对历史文化遗迹的保护方式存在争议。
3.说明支持复原遗迹的人所持的观点及理由。
4.阐述反对者的观点。
5.末段首句表明自己的观点:应具体情况具体对待。
6.通过举例,证明自己的观点。
7.指出另外一种情况:不可复原的遗迹应保持现状。
句法点评:
1. Therefore, they should be restored so as to demonstrate the splendid accomplishments of the ancient people.
用so as to…对主句进行补充,作目的状语。又如:Sometimes my friend goes to the library after school, so as to borrow some interesting books. 我朋友有时下课后会去一下图书馆,为的是借些有趣的书。
2. As to some restorable relics such as China’s Forbidden City, which can give us inspiration on the ancient architecture and information on Chinese royal culture, we should restore them.
在本句中,such as China’s Forbidden City用作插入语。插入语一般用来对一句话作一些附加的说明,使句意更加清晰。which引导的非限制性定语从句修饰前面提到的restorable relics。