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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on parents' role in their childminders growth. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
- 参考答案：Being Master of Your Own Fate.
As is vividly depicted in the picture, a young girl is telling her mother, "Good news, I was accepted to the college of your choice," But ironically, the three words "of your choice." reveal the truth that the dream which has just come true does not belong to the girl at all.
It is such a common thing nowadays that parents make a lot of decisions for their children，even at the major turning points of their life, including choosing colleges and majors, hunting for a job or getting married. Several reasons account for this phenomenon. First of all，parents always think that they are able to make a wiser choice than teenagers. Also，they attach too much attention to their only child in the family. What's more, it seems to be the only way to realize their unfulfilled dreams by letting their children do things that they want them to.
For teenagers, there is a long way to go in their life. They will finally make decisions by themselves. To be master of their own fate is a great step in their growth. - 系统解析：第一句话与第二句话描述图片内容:女孩实现了妈妈的理想。通过ironically一词指出图片的讽刺意味。
第二段的第一句指出这一现象的普遍性，实现了从图片描述到现象分析的转折。
第二段的第二句指出有诸多原因导致这一现象。第二段剩下的几句一一列举产生该现象的原因：而文章最后一段话是对全文进行总结，并向青少年提出倡议：自己做决定，做自己命运的主人。
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