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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on how to best handle the relationship between parents and children. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
- 参考答案：Good Communication Is the Best Policy
①The relationship between parents and children is an eternal and universal topic for the mankind. ②Our relationship with parents might be different at different ages. And for young people at their 20s, ③I think it will more depend on what children do.
④The reason why I say so is that as we grow up, our parents who were our idols before gradually get old and even out-dated. ⑤However hard efforts they make, they could not catch up with our steps, leading to the so-called invisible generation gap between us. Thus, ⑥if we cannot slow down our pace, there will definitely be an awkward silence between parents and us, which is not rare now. ⑦As a result, we young people should talk more with parents to share our feelings and to know each other better.
Everyone wants loving parents who are open and supportive. ⑧Only through frequent communication with each other can we establish such a harmonious relationship with our parents. - 系统解析：①引入话题：父母与子女的关系。
②使用短句形成长短句交替，并承上启下。
③表明观点：对于年轻人而言，这种关系更多地取决于孩子的做法。
④承接上文，解释原因。
⑤让步状语从句给文章增色。
⑥反面论证。
⑦环环相扣，最后得出结论：年轻人应该多与父母交流。
⑧重申观点：经常与父母交流才能建立良好的家庭关系。
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