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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the challenges of living in a big city. You should write at least120 words but no more than 180 words.
  • 参考答案:The Challenges of Living in a Big City
    ① With the development of economy and urbanization, the number of big cities is constantly increasing in China. ② While big cities are attracting piore and more people, they also bring many challenges, such as traffic jam and pollution, just to name a few.
    ③ The first problem that really bothers me is the traffic congestion during rush hours. I hate waiting for buses and being late for school or work. ④ The next problem is that the large population in big cities makes them so crowded that we can hardly find a peaceful place unless staying at home. Supermarkets are always crowded, so are cinemas and parks. ⑤ Another consequence of the large population is that it intensifies the inadequacy of high-quality medical and educational resources, thus decreasing residents, sense of happiness.
    ⑥ As a result, although I am frequently asked whether I like to live in a big city or not, my answer is always "no, definitely not. " What about you?
  • 系统解析:
    ①引出话题:大城市的数量不断增加。
    ②欲抑先扬,指出大城市吸引越来越多的人,但也 带来诸多挑战。
    ③④⑤分别使用" The first problem that really bothers me is..." "The next problem is that…"" Another consequence of the large population is that…"具体阐述在大城市生活面临的
    ⑥用as a result总结全文,再次重申自己的观点, 并以问句结尾,增强互动性。
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