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1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the challenges of starting a career after graduation. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

参考答案：The Challenges of Starting a Career After Graduation
① Recent years have witnessed a sharp rise in the number of college students who successfully start their career after graduation.②However, many others fail to do so because the transition from a student to an employee is actually full of challenges.
③ First of all, you might not be popular with every colleague, which is frustrating for a newcomer of the workplace. So you'd better try to make a good first impression on all of your workmates, especially your boss.④ Furthermore, there probably is a gap between what you've learned at school and what you are required at work. You have to learn actively and quickly, and avoid making too many mistakes.⑤ Finally, the low payment for a new graduate and various living expenses make it difficult to make ends meet, so you may find yourself always on a tight budget.
⑥ As the old proverb goes, "Well begun is half done." ⑦ If you can handle these challenges successfully after graduation, you will clear the path for future career
development, such as job promotion or starting your own business. ⑧ So hold on and never give up!
系统解析：
①描述现象：毕业生成功开启事业的人数大大增加。
②用 however 进行转折，引入话题，提出观点：从学生到职员的转变充满挑战。
③④⑤使用 first of all、furthennore、finally 分别论述毕业生进入职场后会面临的三个挑战，层次清晰。
⑥引用古语，增添文采。
⑦⑧提出建议，展望未来。

2 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a news report to your campus newspaper on a volunteer activity organized by your Student Union to assist elderly people in the neighborhood. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

参考答案：Ten students, organized by the Student Union, visited a senior center close to our school on Wednesday, June 12th, for the purpose of providing help fbr the elderly there.
Our volunteers were warmly welcomed when they arrived there at about 1 pm. They presented the elderly with fresh fruits before dividing themselves into two groups, one responsible for cleaning and the other for chatting. It took nearly an hour for half a dozen volunteers to sweep and mop the floor and then wash all the windows. The rest were, meanwhile, listening attentively to the elderly who looked back on their good old clays with a certain amount of nostalgia. The activity ended with a lecture on how to send voice messages and make video calls on WeChat.
"I'm impressed with their vigor and optimism," says one of the volunteers. "And I'm glad that the entire afternoon we spent together means something to them. They expressed their gratitude for our company, which may be, in my opinion, what they need most."
系统解析：
1.One person caring about another represents life's greatest value. (Jim Rohn)
关爱他人是人生最大的价值。(吉姆·罗恩)
2.During this experience I enjoyed bonding with the residents and making new friends. I also liked learning more about what comes with old age, because it prepares me for old age myself. Another thing I liked was merely the joy of being able to help others.
在此次经历中，我喜欢与居民建立起亲密关系、结交新朋友。我也喜欢进一步了解“什么会伴随着年老而来”，因为这能让我自己对年老有所准备。另外我所喜欢的单纯就是能帮助他人的喜悦感。
3.The way that the elderly respond to the new activities and the students is what I enjoy most. I love seeing the joy that they get from getting out of the rooms and enjoying a new activity other than their scheduled activity. They all like the company and they enjoy younger people taking the time out of their day for them.
老人们对新活动以及学生的反应最令我感到开心。我喜欢看到他们走出房间并享受不同于常规安排的新活动时获得的喜悦。他们每个人都喜欢这种陪伴，喜欢年轻人专程抽出时间来陪他们。

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