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Directions: For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on the kids's understanding of going to school. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

  • 参考答案:This Modern Life
    In the picture is a person using his computer all day, whether he is at work, at home, playing or in his sleep. This drawing vividly depicts a common phenomenon that computers nowadays deeply penetrate into our daily life and we can not do without it even for a minute. However, from my perspective, computers play an important but not indispensable role in our modern life.
    It is true that computers make our life convenient and provide instant assistance. But it is not a necessity. To start with, excessive addiction to computers may exert a negative impact on our health. Instead of taking exercise in our spare time, we may be intrigued by the various contents on it. Furthermore, indulging in computers may isolate us from the social circles. Since we can chat with the virtual friends via computers, we may not bother to communicate with families or friends around us.
    In conclusion, as the product of the high technology, computer really promotes our life. Nevertheless, we should not spend too much time on it at the expense of savoring our good life.
  • 系统解析:
    第一句对漫画进行描述:一天当中人们无时无刻不在使用电脑。
    第二句揭示漫画隐含的信息:电脑现在深深地渗透到我们的日常生活中。
    第三句使用from my perspective提出观点:电脑在日常生活中虽然重要但并非必不可少。
    第四句承上启下,论证观点。
    第六句,第八句使用to start with和futhermore,从两个方面展开论证,层次分明。
    第十句,第十一句使用in conclusion和nevertheless总结观点并提出建议。
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