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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay titled "Are people becoming addicted to technology?". The statement given below is for your reference. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words
Numerous studies claim that addiction to technology is real and it has the same effect on the brain as drug addiction.
- 参考答案：Are people becoming addicted to technology?
①Technology has penetrated into every corner of modern society, ranging from manufacturing industry to family life.②To some extent, people are becomiiig addicted to technology.
③First of all, modern people seem to live on technology products. We get connected with each other via Internet, shop online with mobile phones, and enjoy self-service on machines in banks and restaurants. ④However, many people tend to go to extremes. They rely so heavily on their cellphones that they feel unease once they are not having their cellphones around for more than five minutes. Another typical example is that with the appearance of various social video Apps like TikTok and Kuaishou, people can't resist the temptation of them. They are addicted to the virtual world and even forget to eat, work and communicate with family members or friends. ⑤Moreover, ⑥numerous studies claim that addiction to technology is real and it has the same effect on the brain as drug addiction.
⑦Therefore, it is advisable for modern people to reasonably reduce their addiction to technology while enjoying the convenience brought by it. Nothing should go overboard. - 系统解析：①背景描述，引出话题。
②提出论点：人们正在变得对 科技上瘾。
③④⑤ 通过First of all、However 和 Moreover 层次递进的方式对论点展开论证。
⑥利用题目要求给出的科学证 据增强文章说服力。
⑦得出结论并提出建议。
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