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For this part , you are allowed 80 minutes to write an essay titled "Do violent video games lead to violence? ". The statement given below is for your reference . You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180words.
A growing body of research finds that violent video games can make kids act aggressively in their real world relationships, causing an increase in violence.
- 参考答案：Do violent video games lead to violence?
① The explosive growth of video games in recent two decades has aroused grave social concern. ②One of the main reasons is that many people worry violent video games could lead to violence. ③This is true, especially for child players.
④For one thing, at a young age, children usually don't have good judgement and are prone to imitate the violent behaviours in games and regard them as being cool. ⑤For another, many video games are full of violence to boost players' excitement, thus enhancing their appeal.⑥A growing number of research proves that violent video games contribute to children's aggressive behaviors in their real life.
⑦Considering many teenagers are spending a huge amount of time and money on video games, we need to be alert to the possible harm of violent games that could be done to children. - 系统解析：①背景描述，引出话题。
②③聚焦论点：暴力电子游戏导致儿童玩家产生暴力行为。
④⑤使用 For one thing 和 For another 从两个层面分析暴力产生的原因，层次分明。
⑥利用题目要求给出的论据，并进行改写，一方面增强说服力，另一方面体现对语言的灵活驾驭能力。
⑦结合现状，提出建议
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