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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying "Never go out there to see what happens, go out there to makes something happen" You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of being creative rather than mere onlookers in life. You should write at least 120 words, no more than 180 words.
  • 参考答案:Be Participants Rather than Onlookers
    ① Just as the saying goes, never go out there to see what happens, go out there to make things happen. ② It obviously emphasizes the importance of being participants instead of mere onlookers in life.
    ② There are several reasons accounting for it. ④ To start with, you will never learn the essence of life unless you try something on your own. Whether it's a success or a failure, it will make your life more colorful.⑤ Furthermore, chances are only for those who are brave enough to challenge themselves. They tend to have more choices and opportunities than others. ⑥ Last but not least, Rome is not built in one day. Only if you are a doer rather than a watcher can you get life-long valuable experience.
    ⑦ It is no exaggeration to say that many of the young generations prefer to be onlookers, which seems to be easier and less stressful. But this kind of attitude is devastating.⑧ We should start making a change by applying what we have learned into practice, and play our part in bettering our world, which will finally benefit not only ourselves but also the future generations.
  • 系统解析:
    第①句使用 just as the saying goes,引出话题。
    第②句使用 it obviously emphasizes,点明主题:不做看客,要做实践者。
    第③句承上启下,引出下文对原因的描述。
    第④⑤⑥句使用 to start with, furthermore, last but not least 列举三个原因,层次分明。
    第⑧句指出现实中的问题,并提出倡导和建议。
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