四级写作历年真题第7关

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1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. Suppose you have two options upon graduation: one is to find a job somewhere and the other to start a business of your own. You are to make a decision. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your decision. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

参考答案：①College students' options upon graduation vary from person to person. Some students choose to hunt for a job while others prefer to start their own business. ②As for me, I would rather find a job first.
③The reasons for my decision are as follows. ④For one thing, it is much easier for me to find a job compared with starting a business which demands fund, experience and the market. As a green hand who has just graduated from a college, it's totally beyond my ability to handle such a complex situation. ⑤For another, working for others could develop my personalities, such as perseverance, hardworking and stress tolerance ability, which can help me become more prepared and qualified if I would like to start up my own business.
To conclude, ⑥chances always favor those who are prepared. And I don't think a person could really "build up from nothing". ⑦As a result, I will find a job first after graduation.
系统解析：
①开门见山，描述现象：大学生对于毕业以后的选择因人而异。有些学生会选择找工作，有些则想要自己创业。
②给出自己的选择：先找工作。
③阐述选择找工作的原因。
④⑤For one thing,... For another,... 具体分析不同的原因，层次分明。
⑥恰当引用谚语，增加文采。
⑦给出结论，首尾呼应。

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