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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. Suppose you have two options upon graduation: one is to work in a state-owned business and the other in a joint venture. You are to make a choice between the two. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your choice. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
  • 参考答案:State-owned Business or Joint Venture
    ①Upon graduation, virtually all college students will confront the issue of career choice, which is truly a tough one. ②Some hold that there is no better way to get a decent job than working in a stated-owned business which will guarantee their life after retirement, while others take the attitude that a joint venture outweighs any other jobs as it may provide higher income for employees. ③As for me, I prefer the latter one.
    ④For one thing, a joint venture usually offers a more cooperative and more competitive atmosphere which is suitable for the beginners to grow and develop. ⑤For another, joint ventures usually offer a higher salary, which holds a tremendous fascination for a great number of people, especially for the young who need to cover the expenses of transportation, house-renting,and social activities. ⑥Besides the above two, I adore the diverse business culture in the joint ventures, immersed in which, I can broaden my vision and expand my knowledge.
    ⑦Based on the above reasons, a joint venture will be my first and sole choice.
  • 系统解析:
    ①开门见山,描述现象:大学生毕业之际面临的两种选择。
    ②使用Some...,while others...的表达方式说明学生出于各种原因做出的两种选择。
    ③使用短语As for me表明自己做出的选择。
    ④⑤用For one thing... For another...具体列举不同的原因,层次分明。
    ⑥进一步分析做出选择的原因。
    ⑦使用Based on表明,基于上述理由做出自己的选择。
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