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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay explaining why you are the architect of your own fate. You can give examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

参考答案：Not everyone in the world has roses all the way through his life. One may have growing pains, encounter troubles and difficulties and suffer adversities. No matter what happens, you are the architect of your own fate.
Don’t let your troubles define you. Instead, you define them. That’s a wonderful way for you to define yourself. We all have troubles. There’s no doubt that adversity, which is a good friend for anyone, can bring out the best in us. It’s up to us to choose how to respond to it. You can choose to give in; you can also choose to rise above it. Why don’t you choose to enjoy your life regardless of the challenges that the fate serves you?
Whether we enjoy every day or not, there’s always something to experience and learn. Experiences are life’s way of helping us. When you look on the most difficult experience of your life as a gift, you know you’re making real progress. Never surrender to fate, even for those who are too weak to determine their own destiny. Right now you are the architect of your own destiny. Rise above the troubles and meet them head-on; you’ll triumph.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇简要提及生活不会一帆风顺，为引出文章观点作铺垫。
2.首段末句明确表达文章的观点：每个人才是自己命运的缔造者。紧扣作文话题。
3.采用逻辑推理方法，层层递进，逻辑严密。
4.末段最后使用祈使句号召人们不要屈服于命运，只有把握命运，才能获得最终的胜利。
句法点评：
1. Why don’t you choose to enjoy your life regardless of the challenges that the fate serves you?
本句采用了反问句，强调了挑战命运的重要性，同时也避免了通篇都是一成不变的陈述句式。
2. Never surrender to fate, even for those who are too weak to determine their own destiny.
本句中包含了一个由关系代词who引导的限制性定语从句，修饰限定those。从句的运用使行文更加紧凑，丰富了句式的多样性。

2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on inspiration and action by referring to the remark. “We should be taught not to wait for inspiration to start a thing. Action always generates inspiration. Inspiration seldom generates action.” You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to develop your inspiration and how you can make use of your inspiration. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

参考答案：“We should be taught not to wait for inspiration to start a thing. Action always generates inspiration. Inspiration seldom generates action.” The statement means that if we want to start something, we should take action instead of waiting for inspiration to start it. It is obvious that action is more important than inspiration.
Action will enable us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize our dreams more rapidly. The more action we take, the more likely we are to get inspiration. More importantly, inspiration we get in practice will equip us with better ideas to take active action and get things well done. In this way, we accumulate experience, master skills and get close to our destination. If we just wait for inspiration to start a thing instead of taking action, we may lose an opportunity.
Inspiration is not a decisive factor for success. Just as Edison’s famous remark goes, “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.” Therefore, success lies in perspiration from the action you take instead of inspiration you get.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇简述给定话语的含义。
2.自然过渡，结合话语含义提出文章论点：行动比灵感更重要。
3.从灵感与行动之间关系的角度论证自己的观点。
4.末段总结全文，引用名人名言指出成功的决定因素在于行动中付出的汗水，而不是灵感。
句法点评：
1. It is obvious that action is more important than inspiration.
句中用了It is obvious that...的主语从句结构，该结构在表明观点时经常用到。
2. Therefore, success lies in perspiration from the action you take instead of inspiration you get.
该句中lie in表示“在于......”；instead of连接两个并列成分，the action you take和inspiration you get，二者的核心部分均为名词，且分别被省略了关系代词that的定语从句you take和you get所修饰。

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