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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on personal strivings by commenting on the quote, “Cease to struggle and you cease to live.” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
  • 参考答案:There is a quote that says, “Cease to struggle and you cease to live.” It means that one should never stop pursuing his goals no matter how great the difficulties he encounters are. It stresses the importance of personal strivings. If one stops before setbacks, he will achieve nothing. So personal strivings are of vital importance to success.
    Personal strivings refer to ongoing efforts made by people to achieve their goals. There have been many great figures in history, many of whom were very poor in childhood without relatives or friends to help them out. However, they relied on themselves and never bowed to any difficulty. With their personal strivings, they paved their way to success. Just as the famous saying goes, “God helps those who help themselves.”
    I don’t mean to deny the importance of resources such as money, family support, and social connections that one can leverage. As family has a great influence on personal development, those who can make full use of good family resources will enjoy a better chance to succeed. However, taking advantages of family resources should be based on personal strivings. If one does not work hard himself, he would not achieve any success, no matter how better-off his family may be.
  • 系统解析:
    范文点评:
    1.开篇引入引言并加以简要评述。
    2.首段末句明确表达自己的观点:个人奋斗对于成功而言至关重要。
    3.以伟人凭借个人奋斗取得成功为例,论证个人奋斗的重要性。
    4.引用名言进一步强调个人奋斗的重要性。
    5.补充说明其他因素对于个人成功的作用,使文章观点更为全面。
    6.指出其他因素要以个人奋斗为前提,若个人不努力,家庭条件再优越,也无法取得成功。
    句法点评:
    1. There have been many great figures in history, many of whom were very poor in childhood without relatives or friends to help them out.
    句中many of whom其实是“介词+关系代词”的结构,whom引导定语从句,whom指的是great figures。
    2. I don’t mean to deny the importance of resources such as money, family support, and social connections that one can leverage.
    句中mean to do sth.意为“有意做某事”,that引导定语从句。
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