系统解析:范文点评:
1.开篇引入引言并加以简要评述。
2.首段末句明确表达自己的观点:个人奋斗对于成功而言至关重要。
3.以伟人凭借个人奋斗取得成功为例,论证个人奋斗的重要性。
4.引用名言进一步强调个人奋斗的重要性。
5.补充说明其他因素对于个人成功的作用,使文章观点更为全面。
6.指出其他因素要以个人奋斗为前提,若个人不努力,家庭条件再优越,也无法取得成功。
句法点评:
1. There have been many great figures in history, many of whom were very poor in childhood without relatives or friends to help them out.
句中many of whom其实是“介词+关系代词”的结构,whom引导定语从句,whom指的是great figures。
2. I don’t mean to deny the importance of resources such as money, family support, and social connections that one can leverage.
句中mean to do sth.意为“有意做某事”,that引导定语从句。