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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on facing difficulties by commenting on the saying, “It is difficulties that show what men are.” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

参考答案：“It is difficulties that show what men are.” The saying, which means that only difficulties can reveal one’s true colors, seems to remind everyone not to be afraid of difficulties.
As is known to us all, everyone will come across various difficulties or even get into trouble in their life. However, when facing difficulties, different people have different attitudes. Some feel discouraged and draw back while others rise up to them and fight bravely. Some embrace difficulties with optimism while others escape from reality and never rise above the hardships. How can we face difficulties properly? In my opinion, the following approaches can help you tide over them smoothly.
In the first place, keep positive and optimistic, which can help you go through any tough period of your life. Secondly, embrace any difficulty as a gift instead of flinching from it, which allows you to appreciate your life whether you are in adversity or favorable circumstances. Thirdly, never lose heart and surrender to whatever befalls, which can help you learn from your defeat and improve your ability to take a turn for the better.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇引入引言，并简单加以解释，从而点出论点：不要惧怕困难。
2.采用排比兼对比论述的方式阐明对待困难的各种不同态度。
3.自然过渡，提出如何正确面对困难，渡过难关。
4.分三个层次论证了如何面对困难，条理清楚。
句法点评：
1. It is difficulties that show what men are.
本句采用的是强调句式，即：It is+被强调部分+that+其他。另外，本句中what men are是宾语从句，作show的宾语。
2. Secondly, embrace any difficulty as a gift instead of flinching from it, which allows you to appreciate your life whether you are in adversity or favorable circumstances.
此句中运用了Which引导的非限制性定语从句，which指代前面一句话的意思。whether引导的状语从句用以强调任何环境都不应退却。

2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on trust by commenting on the remark, “We are always paid for our suspicion by finding what we suspect.” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

参考答案：“We are always paid for our suspicion by finding what we suspect.” The remark, which reveals the great harm suspicion does, stresses the importance of trust.
I agree that trust is indispensable to maintaining genuine relationships among people. Everyone in the world cannot live without interacting with other people. Otherwise, life would be dull and meaningless. Trust is the basic foundation for people to communicate with each other. Without trust, we cannot get along well with others, let alone cooperate with them.
In addition, I maintain that trust is also essential to our country’s efforts to build a harmonious society. Our country is dedicated to building a world full of honesty, friendship, and justice, where people are able to engage in fair and open competition. Harmonious society calls for trust and honesty as well as the strong power to eradicate the crisis of confidence partly resulting from the dishonesty of some manufacturers and businessmen who make or sell shoddy goods in pursuit of profit. In the long run, they will lose potential customers and even cause their companies to shut down. They pose a great threat to the building of a harmonious society.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇引用引语，意在引出话题。
2.准确阐释引语含义，意在引出中心思想。
3.阐述关于信任的第一个观点：信任对于维系人们之间真正的感情不可或缺。
4.阐述关于信任的第二个观点：信任对于构建和谐社会必不可少。
句法点评：
1. In addition, I maintain that trust is also essential to our country’s effort to build a harmonious society.
此句中，I maintain that...意为“我认为......”，类似的句式还有：I hold that..., I assume that...等。
2. In the long run, they will lose potential customers and even cause their companies to shut down.
此句中in the long run 表示“从长远来看”，是逻辑性修饰语，使得观点的表述具有更强的逻辑性。cause sb. to do sth.意为“导致某人做某事”，应多积累相关表达方式。

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