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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on venture by commenting on the saying, “Nothing ventured,nothing gained.” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
  • 参考答案:A famous saying goes like this: “Nothing ventured, nothing gained”, which means we can gain nothing if we venture nothing. It shows that the adventurous spirit is an essential quality for people to achieve success. A person who never takes any risk or tries new things will never make any progress.
    Nowadays, there are more and more adventures like bungee jumping and rock climbing, which enjoy great popularity especially among the youth. Some people argue that such activities are too risky so they never venture to try, while others insist that these activities do more good than harm and should be encouraged. As for me, I agree with the latter. In my opinion, people can develop courage and willpower by embarking on adventures. If a person is afraid of risks or new things, he will never experience the joy of life or make any progress. If the leaders of a country are fearful of taking risks, the country will cease to advance.
    In conclusion, adventures bring us many rewarding benefits. As long as we take everything into consideration and make full preparation before taking risks, we can minimize the dangers and maximize the benefits.
  • 系统解析:
    范文点评:
    1.开篇简要说明谚语的含义及寓意。
    2.自然过渡,说明当今社会不乏冒险活动,并指出很多年轻人很喜欢这些冒险。
    3.采用对比论证的方法,引出人们对冒险的不同看法,紧扣作文话题。
    4.第二段后半部分明确表达自己的观点:参加冒险活动利大于弊。
    5.末段总结全文,重申观点,并指出我们应对冒险做好充分的准备。
    句法点评:
    1. Some people argue that such activities are too risky so they never venture to try, while others insist that these activities do more good than harm and should be encouraged.
    这是一个复合句。while在句中作并列连词用,意思为“而,然而”,表对比,相当于but,但含有对比的意思。
    2. As long as we take everything into consideration and make full preparation before taking risks, we can minimize the dangers and maximize the benefits.
    在这句话中,as long as引导条件状语从句,表示“只要”。
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