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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay commenting on the famous verse by the British poet Percy Bysshe Shelley, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words hut no more than 200 words.

参考答案：The famous remark “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?” means that difficulties will pass by very soon and we should not feel frustrated. It reminds us to face the difficulty bravely and never to give up.
As matter of fact, life is a mixture of success and failure as well as a combination of happiness and sadness. So we have to consider what we can do to tap our strengths to overcome difficulties and keep going when times are tough or we are confronted with hardships and even defeats. Then how can we overcome difficulties?
For one thing, hold a positive attitude toward your life. Enthusiastic attitude towards hardships is a crucial factor that will determine whether you can be successful or not. It allows you to rise up to any challenge in your life. For another, set ambitious goals for yourself. Once you establish your goals, you will motivate yourself to achieve them step by step and the difficulties among the way will never stop you. Therefore, we need to make full of our potentials to face the challenges and enjoy the pleasure of overcoming difficulties. 范文点评：
1.开篇引入引语并简要阐释引语的含义。
2.借引语含义引出克服困难的话题。
3.阐述困难和失败乃生活之常事，因此必须勇于面对和克服它们，而不能逃避。
4.承上启下，引出该如何克服困难。
5.从两个方面阐述如何克服困难，条理清晰，层次分明。
6.末句总结全文，指出我们应克服困难并享受克服困难所带来的快乐。
句法点评：
1. As a matter of fact, life is a mixture of success and failure as well as a combination of happiness and sadness.
本句中as well as表示“也，而且“，意思上相当于and，连接两个并列、对等成分：a mixture of success and failure 和 a combination of happiness and sadness。
2. Enthusiastic attitude towards hardships is a crucial factor that will determine whether you can be successful or not.
本句中that引导定语从句，该定语从句中嵌套着whether...or not引导的宾语从句，作determine的宾语。 26、大学英语六级写作模拟题
系统解析：

2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the importance of making efforts by commenting on Thomas Hardy s remark, “I might say that success is won by three things: first, effort; second, more effort; third, still more effort.” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

参考答案：Thomas Hardy once said, “I might say that success is won by three things: first, effort; second, more effort; third, still more effort.” It reveals that the only way to achieve success is to spare no effort. I absolutely agree with it.
Everyone tries to achieve success. But some finally make it while others fail. There is no doubt that those who stick to the end through a long period of hard struggles attain their aims while those who are not willing to make more industrious efforts stop halfway and thus cannot achieve success.
From my perspective, efforts mean hardwork with more perseverance. Heaven rewards the diligent. We all know “no pains, no gains.” There is no royal road to the summit of success. Without exerting oneself, it is impossible to succeed. Making persistent efforts is like laying bricks one next to another. Only by working with whole-hearted devotion and perseverance can we attain success. Thus, hardwork with more perseverance is the deciding factor to one’s success.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇引用引语，意在引出本文话题。
2.揭示引语的寓意，即文章的中心思想：成功的唯一方式就是全力以赴。
3.首段末句明确表明自己赞同上述观点。
4.对比论证观点：努力的人才会成功，反之就会失败。
5.给出个人对努力的理解并加以详细阐述。
句法点评：
1. There is no doubt that those who stick to the end through a long period of hard struggles attain their aims while those who are not willing to make more industrious efforts stop halfway and thus cannot achieve success.
此处采用了固定句型：There is no doubt that...，意为“毫无疑问，......”，其中that引导同位语从句，后面的those who...while those who...是并列的对比结构，正反对比说明了努力付出和不愿付出的结果，其中who均引导定语从句。
2. Heaven rewards the diligent.
该句对应的中文是“天道酬勤”，平时应多注意中文成语的常见译法。

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