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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on reading by referring to the saying “There are worse crimes than burning books. One of them is not reading them.” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

参考答案：Just as an old saying goes “The portals of the rich reek of flesh and wine while frozen bodies lie by the roadside”，having books but not reading them is just the same.
Having books but not reading them is compared to committing crimes and it is indeed the case. Firstly, it is a waste of resources. They possess the valuable book resources but they don’t cherish them. On the contrary, some others who want to read books can’t access them because they are poor. Secondly, many people regard owning books as the symbol of status and books become assets to show off their status. However, books are special goods and their value is embodied in teaching people knowledge. Writers spend a lot of time and effort finishing their works. But their painstaking effort has been undervalued and spoiled by those who show off their books as their possessions.
In summary, owning books is such a lucky thing that one should make the best of them. Only by doing so can the value of books be fully reflected.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开头使用类比，形象地刻画了有书不读的人的罪恶。
2.分两层从不同方面进行说明：一是从资源浪费方面，一是从作者的心血付之东流方面。
3.结尾段再次深化主题，给出拥有书的人应该有的对待书的正确态度。句法点评：
1. On the contrary, some others who want to read books can’t access them because they are poor.
短语on the contrary意为“反之”，用于引出与上文相对的情形。
2. But their painstaking effort has been undervalued and spoiled by those who show off their books as their possessions.
关系代词who引导的定语从句修饰先行词those。

2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on stepping forward and stepping backward by referring to the saying “You will either step forward into growth，or you will step backward into safety.” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

参考答案：There are no excessive choices for us to live in the world: either step forward into growth, or step backward into safety.
We may face all kinds of difficulties unexpectedly in the process of advancing. We may also confront frustration and failure. However, these experiences are valuable assets for us, which will enrich our experience, improve our ability, help us grow and lead us to success eventually.
If we choose stepping backward, we can get to safety; however, this is transitory. Although we don’t need to meet difficulties and challenges actively, we have to make effort just to keep the temporary safety within the development of the society. Just as the truth that “In the future, the only constant is change. If you don’t change, you will be washed out by the constantly changing future”，told in the book Who Moved My Cheese?
In a word, life is like sailing against the current: either you keep forging ahead or you keep falling behind. If you advance bravely, the success is just around the corner waiting for you. If you draw back to your cosy nest, you won’t have any chance to succeed.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇点题，直截了当。
2.指出前进可能会带来闲难和挑战，但是最终将带给我们成功。
3.指出后退可能获得暂时的平安，但是最终将被淘汰。
4.结尾段继续从两方面加以说明，加深主题。
句法点评：
1. However, these experiences are valuable assets for us, which will enrich our experience, improve our ability, help us grow and lead us to success eventually.
本句中包含which引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰主句的主语these experience。
2. Although we don’t need to meet difficulties and challenges actively, we have to make effort just to keep the temporary safety within the development of the society.
本句是由although引导的让步状语从句，在although和though引导的让步状语从句中，主句前不可用but，若要强调前后两部分的对比意义，可在主句前加yet或still。

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