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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on parenting by referring to the saying “Example is better than precept.” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
  • 参考答案:Parents are children’s lifelong teachers. It goes without saying that teaching by example and precept is important. But which one is more important? An old saying gives us the answer, “Example is better than precept.”
    There was a father who cared a lot about his son’s future and he patiently urged his son to study hard every day but the son never followed his words. Then he came up with a good idea: After that he went to work in the daytime as usual, but when he went back home every day, he began to keep reading in the evening. Gradually, things began to change. The son followed his father’s lead and became increasingly interested in reading and finally formed the habit of learning by himself after school. This story teaches us the truth that example is better than precept.
    But, there always are some parents who care much about precept and care less about example. Some parents’ words are not matched by their deeds, which has negative effects on children, not to mention playing a good role in parenting.
    To sum up, parents should try their best to be good examples for their children. Example should be given top priority with precept as supplement and parents’ actions should be consistent with what they say.
  • 系统解析:
    范文点评:
    1.通过谚语引出主题:言传不如身教。
    2.两个段落从正反两个方面论证主题,并采用举例和说理结合的方式加强论证力度。
    3.末段采用提建议的方式,呼应首段主题。
    句法点评:
    1. It goes without saying that teaching by example and precept is important.
    这个句型意为“不言而喻,无须说......”。it是形式主语,真正的主语是that引导的主语从句。
    2. This story teaches us the truth that example is better than precept.
    此句是是常见的总结性语句;Example is better than precept是个谚语,意为“言传不如身教”。
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