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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture, explain its intended meaning and then illustrate how we can make the most of brainstorm. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

参考答案：As can be seen in the picture, a woman got confused by a man's funny hairstyle, which looks like a mass of cloud and the caption under the picture says, “Some days you get a brainstorm, but other days you just get the clouds.” It conveys the message that collision of minds sometimes brings some really creative thinking, but sometimes leads the mind into total chaos. Despite its negative effect, brainstorming can generate fruitful results if applied properly.
Firstly, brainstorming should be treated with correct attitude. Brainstorming is not something fantastic; it is in fact something interesting and meaningful. Furthermore, brainstorming is not a thinking confined to one person. Just as an old saying goes, “Two heads are better than one”. Collective force can strengthen the performance of a brainstorm. Besides, brainstorm requires organizing, analyzing, investigating and selecting. Those practical ideas should be singled out to be delved into deeply until a good plan takes shape while those unpractical ideas should be excluded.
To sum up, if utilized appropriately, brainstorming can be beneficial to social development.
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2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should describe the picture, explain its intended meaning and then illustrate why we should pay more attention to global warming. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

参考答案：As is depicted in the picture, weather is becoming so hot that the duck even feels that the pig smells like bacon. A little exaggerated though it sounds, it is an indisputable fact that global warming is becoming increasingly severe.
Global warming has negative effects on many aspects. Firstly, global warming may cause the icebergs to melt, which may lead to a rise in sea level. As a result, some island nations will be submerged by the sea. Secondly, due to global warming, natural disasters occur frequently, such as floods, hurricanes and so on. Thirdly, the ecological balance will be destroyed and many creatures will disappear for ever with the aggravation of global warming. Fourthly, the cost to compensate for the loss caused by global warming will be huge.
In conclusion, global warming is a serious problem. We should pay more attention to it. Let's take actions, start from ourselves, advocate the low-carbon way of life, and contribute our efforts to the protection of the planet.
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范文点评：
1.首段末句点明这幅漫画的寓意：全球变暖日益严重。
2.自然过渡，开始讨论全球变暖带来的危害。
3.围绕主题，分四个层次展开论述，有力支撑了全球变暖危害严重的观点。
4.末段呼吁人们对全球变暖给予足够的重视，并倡导人们行动起来，保护地球。句法点评：
1.A little exaggerated though it sounds, it is an indisputable fact that global warming is becoming increasingly severe.
全句是包含though引导的让步状语从句的复合句。though引导的让步状语从句使用了倒装语序，改成正常语序应该是Though it sounds a little exaggerated。后半句为该复合句的主句，主句句首的it为形式主语，真正的主语是后面that引导的从句。
2.Let's take actions, start from ourselves, advocate the low-carbon way of life, and contribute our efforts to the protection of the planet.
使用祈使句感召力更强，take, start, advocate和contribute四个动词排比使用，更有气势。

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