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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on keeping going beyond yourself by referring to the remark “To be pleased with one’s limits is a wretched state.” You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can keep going beyond yourself. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
  • 参考答案:“To be pleased with one’s limits is a wretched state.” That means we should not be content with the status quo but keep going beyond ourselves.
    I completely agree with the point that we should transcend ourselves. Firstly, life affords no higher pleasure than that of surmounting difficulties, which encourages us to pass from one step of success to another, from new hopes and see them realized. Secondly, keep going no matter what adversities might appear, because there’s always something new out there, somewhere we’ve never been. It is a process of going beyond us and challenging the limit. It feels like everything is possible. Helen Keller set a good example in going beyond herself.
    How can you keep going beyond yourself? In my opinion, set an ambitious goal, for which you will not be afraid of difficulties and consistently seek advancement to reach your goal. Maybe you achieve some success, but you know that’s not your final goal and therefore you will not rest on your laurels and keep going. Maybe you are confronted with difficulties, but you know you should overcome them and keep going. Only by keeping going beyond yourself can you succeed and reach your goal.
  • 系统解析:
    范文点评:
    1.开篇简述给定话语的含义,并结合话语含义提出文章论点:我们不应安于现状,要不断超越自我。
    2.第二段首句明确表明自己的立场:完全同意不断超越自我的观点。
    3.分两个层次论证了自己的观点,论据充分,论证有力。
    4.以问句的方式过渡,自然引出如何超越自我的话题。
    5.阐述超越自我的途径:远大的目标会让人们不断去超越自我。
    句法点评:
    1.I completely agree with the point that we should transcend ourselves.
    此句中I completely agree with the point that是表明自己的观点时常用的表达方式。
    2. In my opinion, set an ambitious goal, for which you will not be afraid of difficulties and consistently seek advancement to reach your goal.
    此句中用了 “for + which”引导的定语从句,which指代的是ambitious goal,使句式多样化。
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