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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Purpose of Education. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
Some people say one’s education should be tailored to meet social demand.
Others argue that one should be educated to fulfill one’s own dream.
What’s your opinion about the purpose of education?
  • 参考答案:The Purpose of Education
    What does education aim for? This is a topic which is usually talked about. Some believe that education should be tailored to meet social needs. However, others hold that the purpose of education is to help educates realize their personal dreams.
    In my opinion, education should give consideration to both social needs and personal dreams. Firstly, education should try to meet social needs in order to promote the sustained and healthy development of our society. We should be guided by the demands of society, establish the scientific education system, and form the virtuous circle in which education serves society and society nurtures education. Furthermore, in the long run, education should respect educatees’ personal dreams and cultivate talents with innovation consciousness because they are decisive forces which push the society forward.
    To sum up, education should take both social needs and personal dreams into consideration. Neither of them can be sacrificed at the cost of the other. Only with the combination of the two can we make a successful and meaningful education.
  • 系统解析:
    范文点评:
    1.首句以问句开篇,围绕此问句为中心展开讨论。
    2.从两个不同角度对问句进行回答。
    3.给出个人观点,并对首段提出的观点加以总结。
    4.从两方面加以论证。
    5.总结段把前面的讨论推向一个高潮,突出主题。
    句法点评:
    1. We should be guided by the demands of society, establish the scientific education system, and form the virtuous circle in which education serves society and society nurtures education.
    此处使用了介词+关系代词引导的定语从句,in which相当于关系副词where。
    2. Only with the combination of the two can we make a successful and meaningful education.
    only引导的状语放在句首,句子要倒装,所以将情态动词can放到了主语we的前面。
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