系统解析:范文点评:
1.首句以问句开篇,围绕此问句为中心展开讨论。
2.从两个不同角度对问句进行回答。
3.给出个人观点,并对首段提出的观点加以总结。
4.从两方面加以论证。
5.总结段把前面的讨论推向一个高潮,突出主题。
句法点评:
1. We should be guided by the demands of society, establish the scientific education system, and form the virtuous circle in which education serves society and society nurtures education.
此处使用了介词+关系代词引导的定语从句,in which相当于关系副词where。
2. Only with the combination of the two can we make a successful and meaningful education.
only引导的状语放在句首,句子要倒装,所以将情态动词can放到了主语we的前面。