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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the measurement of a country’s progress. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words according to the following guidelines: Economic progress is one way to measure a country’s success. Many people think other factors are also important. What’s your ideal standard of measuring a nation’s progress?

参考答案：When it comes to how to measure a country’s progress, different people may have different standards of it.
Some people may hold that economic progress is one way to measure a country’s success. With economic progress, people witness great improvement in living conditions and increase of living standard. While others maintain that other factors, such as better social systems and the increasingly enhanced international political status, are also important. There are also people who think that GDP growth means social progress, technological development and productive increase.
There is no doubt that the factors such as economic progress, GDP growth, social systems and international political status are very important ones to measure a country’s progress. But for my part, more indicators related to health and environment should figure into measures of national progress. For instance, less inequality and unemployment, less water and air pollution, good climate, less wetlands depletion and more forest cover, higher education and lower crime rate—all these indicators more accurately reflect the progress of human society. To conclude, the overall social improvement can be an ideal standard of measuring a nation’s progress.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开门见山直接切入文章话题：衡量—个国家的进步，不同的人可能会有不同的标准。
2.采用列举的方式阐述三类衡量国家进步的标准。
3.对三种观点给予肯定，以退为进，引出自己的看法。
4.指出衡量国家进步的标准应涵盖更多。
5.举例说明国家进步的表现，详细全面，令人信服。
6.末句总结自己对衡量国家进步标准的观点。
句法点评：
1. Some people may hold that economic progress is one way to measure a country’s success.
此句型用以表达“某人持有某种观点”，hold意为“认为”，相当于 believe或think。
2. But for my part, more indicators related to health and environment should figure into measures of national progress.
此句式用于表达自己的观点，for one’s part意为“就某人而言”。

2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on advantages and disadvantages of nuclear energy. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. Some hold that nuclear energy is a better choice for meeting increasing demand. Others are against nuclear energy because they think nuclear energy may be irreversibly harmful to people’s health and environment. What’s your opinion? Why?

参考答案：Nuclear energy plants provide about 17 percent of the world’s electricity. More than 400 nuclear energy plants around the world are under use now. In France, for instance, about 75 percent of the electricity is generated from nuclear energy. Many countries increasingly depend on nuclear energy for electricity.
Some hold that nuclear energy is a good choice for meeting increasing demand. The rapid development of economy and society as well as the expanded population, causes heavy burden to the resource supply. In these conditions, nuclear energy shows its giant charm in providing energy efficiently and largely. But others are against nuclear energy because they think nuclear energy may be irreversibly harmful to people’s health and environment. Once the unexpected situation happens, it may cause a tragedy to human beings. And the nuclear crisis of 2011 of Japan has supported their concern to some degree.
As for me, I am in favor of using nuclear energy. First, nuclear energy produces nearly no conventional air pollution, which can be called as “clean energy”. Besides, due to advancements in technology, risks such as natural disaster can be avoided scientifically. Last, compared with other energies like solar energy, wind energy and tidal energy, it is the best to solve the shortage of coal and natural gas.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.首段简述核能的广泛使用情况，为下文详细论述做好铺垫。
2.通过对比论证的方式阐述支持与反对两方的不同看法及理由。
3.结尾从三个方面详细阐述个人观点，理由充分。
句法点评：
1. Once the unexpected situation happens, it may cause a tragedy to human beings.
once引导状语从句，表示条件，意为“一旦……”。
2. Last, compared with other energies like solar energy, wind energy and tidal energy, it is the best to solve the shortage of coal and natural gas.
过去分词短语compared with other energies like solar energy, wind energy and tidal energy作状语，表被动。

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